Great story =] I really like it!

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great story! i wish you'd update sooner!

i'd appreciate it if you'd take the time to read mine. thanks, and keep writing!!!

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Hey. This is an awsome chapter and dont worry about the time between chapters. Its hard to update frequently. I think I have about seven people yelling at me throught reviews for not updating on another site. Keep writing what you can and Im sure you will think of something to do with this story sooner or later.

-FMM- (10/10)

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This is so great!!! Hurry and post another chapter!! Can't wait for more!!

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pleeeassee write more i will keep reviewing!

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YAY!!! I'm so glad you updated!! Keep it up, and i can't wait for the next!!!

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Don't worry, I completely understand about writer's block! Keep going!

Author's Response: Thanks for understanding! and ur review!

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This is such an awesome story. Hope you add more!!! Please add more!!

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AWwws such a loverly chapter! Poor ol' bailey, but im sure everything will work out in the end. Thanks!

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G R E A T C H A P T E R ! ! !

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Liked the chapter, and everyone deserves reviews! Hope Sirius and Bailey actually talk properly. Anyway great chapter, please update soon (even though it is difficult) 10/10

Author's Response: im gald you think so. and Sirius and Bailey will get there eventually. lol. thanks for the review.

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Please pleasy please make more chapters!! *sniffles and grovels at feet* =)

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Aww, the beggining was so sweet! Just a word of advice, everytime a new person speaks you gotta start a new line underneath, its easier to figure out who was speaking, but really, this is a really sweet story!

xx, Voldemortia

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OH Em EFF Gee!
You should totally continue this story. It hasa strong plot and excellent foundation for the writing. I ADORE where you've started new paragraphs, and everything about this story seems to flow really well together. I can't wait for a new chapter. Keep writing!

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hello!!! loved it, and im very interested in seeing what happens next. please get chapter four out! :)

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Yay! I really REALLY like this story! I'm so glad that Bailey did the makeover. Don't let her go back to before! I know that sounds pretty superficial but I think she should learn to like it. The only thing that I didn't like about this story was in the last chapter you said that Bailey was only 79 pounds, and if she's seventeen she must be anorexic or something to be so skinny...Other than that it was brilliant! Pretty please with sugar and icing and other little tasty dooda's UPDATE SOON!

Cheers,
sailor gal

Author's Response: crap its supposed to say 89lbs. all right thanks for pointing that out. ok anyway thanks so much for reading and im really glad you liked it.

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i officially love this story! Harper sounds the nicest out of all her roommates, and Gail obviously is the meanest... plz update soon!

Author's Response: Yea Harper is really sweet. Gail........yea not so much.

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79 lbs. . ?!?!?!?! and they are in what year? 7th, i think. i weigh a couple pounds than that and im way younger, but i guess it helps that im short...

loved it!


Author's Response: haha Thanks! I kno she's a bit light, but I wanted to really emphasize her tininess (is that a word?) anyway thanks for reading!

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sirius shouldnt judge a book by its cover... or a girl by her looks, guess he was just made that way

loved it by the way!

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LUV IT! AGAIN! I AM SO GLAD BAILY IS PRETTYFUL!! NXT CHAPPIE! NXT CHAPPIE! NXT CHAPPIE!

Author's Response: THANKS!

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omg i luv it so far!!! i luv the topic 2! on to chappie 3!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

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Please update soon. I absolutely love it.

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Wowee! I'm so excited!!! This is really great! I hope Bailey tells Sirius off for being mean to her when she wasn't noticeable, and only reallly acknowledging her when she was dressed up! But then I also want them to get together.oh it's so confusing!

Author's Response: lol dont worry. Bailey and Sirius are gonna be a confusing pair. I hope you keep reading.

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i lovedd her transformationn(:
it was awesome. hah.
i cant wait for the next chapta
and i loved how you described her.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

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i know how u feel! i just began my first story too! i really like the topic of your story and i cant wait to see how it turns out!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really hoping it turns out well. I hope you keep reading.

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