8 Reviews Found

Review #1, by ~*~*J*~*~ The Feast

25th September 2007:
heyy
really really really luv ur story
update soon
=D

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Review #2, by editor The Feast

27th August 2007:
awsome story id liek to review thsi once over though and you could use a bit of spelling pointers oo

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Review #3, by PourYourHeartOut The Feast

17th August 2007:
Great story! Can't wait to read more

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Review #4, by phobia_of_seaweed The Feast

17th August 2007:
brill brill brill brill brill brill brill brill brill brill brill brill brill brill brill brill brill brill brill brill!

please continue, cannot wait for the plot to start!
Jessica is amazingly brutal, she is my favourite.

Olivia.

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Review #5, by OmiXitsXJaime The Hogwarts Express

15th August 2007:
I completly LOVED IT!
Its actually prolly one of my favorite stories EVER!
10/10
(I'd give you more, but it wont let me--=[
~jAiMe

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Review #6, by Diamond Wings The Hogwarts Express

5th August 2007:
Wow! It's really good =D I love it! I think you wrote Sirius perfectly and your a great author even if English isn't your first language, I've seen FFs that have 10 times more mistakes than that and Engliah is their first language! Lol! Good Luck and KEEP WRITING! Love Rocky (Newest Fan!) xxx

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Review #7, by Racha The Hogwarts Express

5th August 2007:
Very good. Seriously couldn't tell that English isn't your first language (and was actually thinking that you have better spelling and grammar than a lot of people on this site ^_^). Update, please!

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Review #8, by PourYourHeartOut The Hogwarts Express

4th August 2007:
This is really really good! Can't wait to read more

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