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Review #1, by Fugacity Never Forget

17th July 2014:
Simple and sweet.
A lot of people have figured Luna and Neville for a couple and it seems possible they would work out.
Of course, the cannon pairing of Neville with Hanna Abbot and Luna with Rolf Scamander works even better - as it should since it came from the mind of their author.

Author's Response: Thank you, it was my intention to keep this story simple and sweet. The benefit of being able to write off of ideas presented by J.K. Rowling in the original series is that we can put together couples that never happened in the books. I.e. Luna/Neville, Draco/Hermione, Snape/Lily! :) Hope you enjoyed the story either way

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Review #2, by fredlovesme18 Never Forget

6th April 2008:
Really good story! I am so glad someone finally did one on Luna. She is such a great character. Please keep writing about Harry and friends. I love all your stories so far!

Author's Response: thank you soo much! Barely anyone reviews that story and I think its pretty good so thankyou for reviewing it and I'm glad you like my other stories as well ... I'll try to make them as enjoyable as possible ... keep reading

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Review #3, by rowenaravenclaw94 Never Forget

16th September 2007:
that was pleasant...10/10!

Author's Response: Thankx I'm glad you enjoyed it :) and thankx for reviewing

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Review #4, by Terapsin Never Forget

22nd August 2007:
I like this story, because Luna really is like... Luna.
But please do something about those big blanks, it's just, well... wow.

Author's Response: srry but I did have the fixed copy up and it should be up for all to read already...hope u liked it and I hope everyone will like the newer version. thankx

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Review #5, by Thelastwolf Never Forget

21st August 2007:

You've done a good job of catching the essence of Luna. The story could have had a longer scene with Luna and Neville in the Department of Mysteries. Lots of HPFF authors have wonderful build-ups to scenes where folks declare their love but then seem to rush that scene. Basically a little better balance would be good.

I love the line about how Neville was the proud father of two
of her children. My question was - 'Okay, which two?' :-)

You had a few run on sentences that could have been cleaned up.

Looking forwardt more stories from you

Author's Response: Thankx that was a very nice review and I'm glad you left me some advice I'll be sure to work on those things and fix them in this story and my future stories to come :) Thankx

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Review #6, by Severus Supporter Never Forget

20th August 2007:
Very nice ending.

Author's Response: Thank-you I'm glad you enjoyed it.... and thankx for the review :)

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Review #7, by Joanne K Never Forget

19th August 2007:
This is a good emotional piece of writing and I enjoyed Luna's soul searching. It kind of ruined the flow of the piece though when you added your a/n right in the middle of it though. You should put your a/n at the beginning or end of your chapter, because as I was really getting immersed in your writing suddenly there's this a/n, then I had to try to get back in the moment again. The other thing that didn't fit in was when you briefly changed to Neville's POV, you should have just stuck to the same POV for the whole story. You also need to watch your punctuation when you're writing dialogue, in some places you haven't put the talking marks in the right places which makes it hard to read.
Sorry, I hope I don't sound too picky (I'm a teacher I can't help it). Overall I did really like this piece :)

Author's Response: Thankx I'm ahppy you liked it even though, apparently it has soo many mistakes that I am willing to fix :)

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