It all makes sense now! Freaking "depersonalize-man" over here is just like his father! But i have to say this (in the long run) has and forever will tarnish my memories of Harry P:otter. Great job writing, but I suggest going through a few of your chapters again because I noticed a few punctuation errors. Report Review
Well...it's your story, and I like it, but I find it so hard to believe that Harry's friends, Gryffindors, would break their loyalty to Harry. Especially over...the Dursleys? Yes, they're humans, but I would have liked to see more drama in the courtroom to explain what made Harry seem like a cold-blooded, viscious murderer. Would YOU turn on a friend/godson like that, without the evidence presented to a court? Report Review
Keep writing its a really good story. Report Review
Please Continue the story! Report Review
I love it so far, keep up the good work andhopeyou have better luck with the deletions. Report Review
This was very good. I have been following your story for nearly over a year. Please update soon. :-) I love both Simple Plan and My Chemical Romance.Author's Response: Thanks! MCR FTW. Report Review
Not all things are black and white, add some "grey" Report Review
Not everyone is going to abandon him... come on he has to have some people on his side. It was so sudden... Harry youre horrible, we hate you! I could see some of them turning on him, but not all. I like the premise, I just think it could be more realistic. Report Review
I hope you update soon. I really like your story, although it is rather depressing sometimes. Report Review
Ok, just a little prediction here:
1. He doesn't die
2. Snape is his father
3. James didn't know
4. Lily is still his mom.
Since I'm not a seer, these could be drastically wrong. I'm pretty sure about the first one though.Author's Response: Good guess! Just a little hint for you: Numbers one, two, and four are right. I'll leave the rest for you to figure out!
Keep reading, the new chapter is now in the queue! :) Michelle Report Review
Excellent chapter and storyAuthor's Response: Thanks for the review! :) Michelle Report Review
he needs to find out snape's his dad!!! and i want him to live. and have like the whole school go into a panic when the savior goes missingAuthor's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I'm glad you stuck to this story...I know, I know, it's been like a month since I updated. Don't blame me, I had already written the next two chapters, but the stupid Chapter Eight kept getting rejected to the point where I had to almost delete the entire last paragraph. That's why it's so vague, I'm sorry but the validators told me that if I didn't change it, it would get rejected.
Then, my account got suspended!!! I almost went into shock after reading that, I mean I haven't broken any HPFF rules! I couldn't even access my account for an entire month! I was so frustrated, but I kept myself busy trying to write more chapters.
Don't worry though, Harry will soon find out the truth about his parents (the real ones), soon. I'm planning to submit the Chapter Nine as soon as my Chapter Two on my other story gets validated. I'm alternating on both so both can get progress in them without you guys waiting like three weeks for me to finish a chapter. That way, you can follow both stories.
I'm sorry for babbling on like this, but I just needed some way to release my pent up frustration.
Anyway, expect a new chapter coming soon from both stories and I hope you keep reading! :) Report Review
Poor Harry, I hope he eventually gets his life back together...On second thoughts, I hope he doesn't! As I told you last chapter, I LOVE ANGST!
This story is pretty well written. There are quite a few stories which involves Harry getting wrongly accused and sent to Azkaban. The ones that have been finished seem to make Harry get over the ordeal pretty quickly. In real life you wouldn't get over something like that so fast (especially considering how the dementors affect Harry).
I think I know who Harry's 'father' is going to be but I won't say the name (don't want to ruin it for anyone if I am right.)
I was planning to write a longer review then this but it is very late and I really should be in bed right now, so I'm going to have to leave.
Looking forward to the next chapter!! Please update both of your stories soon!!
~~Ginny_Alamalexia~~Author's Response: Thank you for the long review! I rarely get such a detailed review as this. I am submitting the new chapter for Different Life, and as soon as that is validated, I'm submitting Chapter Nine for this story.
Don't worry, there'll be definitely more angst to come, and Harry' will be finding out about his father soon.
Thank you for your most wonderful review, it cheered me up a lot! :) Report Review
Please update, I think everyone hating Harry is just wrong! Can't wait for more!Author's Response: I'm going to update once my other story's new chapter is up since I haven't updated that story even longer than this one, (however long it is...LOL). For some unknown reason my account got suspended for a month and I haven't been able to update. It's all over now though, I'll be back and adding new chapters before you know it! :) Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
Ah! I still don't understand why your title says having a father! Harry so far hasn't had a father throughout the whole story So, I vote he doesn't die! He can't die until the title is fully explained in the story!Author's Response: I'll give you a little hint: He won't die, though he'll be close. He will soon be finding out his *father*, and trust me, he won't be happy! That's all your getting out of me! ;) Report Review
I love it! Please keep with this story because I'll keep reading it.Author's Response: Thank you! Don't worry, I'll keep with it...Thanks for reviewing! :) Report Review
Poor Harry. It made me cry! :( This is really a depressing chapter. I just can't wait to read more.Author's Response: I can't wait to write more, seeing all these reviews just make me want to write more and more! I'll be updating soon, so keep in touch! :) Bye for now! Report Review
this is a vary interesting story line. keep up the good work.Author's Response: Thanks, I hope you keep reading, since there are now four more chapters out. The eighth one just got validated! Adieu for now! :) Report Review
Alittle depressing.. but youve increased your skill of writing by a lot. Well doneAuthor's Response: Thanks, I had realized that I could have added more detail into my chapters, so I gave it a try - and it seems like it's getting a much better response than my before chapters. I'm thinking at one point I may go back and redo my first few chapters, up to Chapter Four. Chapter Four is where the changes started, so I'll probably just edit Chapters One to Three.
Keep reading! :) Report Review
This story is turning out great so far!=]
Love it!Author's Response: Thanks! I love reviews, don't you? Report Review
Cool Story! Love it! :) 10+Author's Response: Thank you for the very nice comment, I hope you keep reading! :) Report Review
I LOVE your story; it made me cry! Please, please, keep writing.Author's Response: Thank you! The next chapter is already in the queue, though it's like been rejected three times already...the cutting scene was too graphic...so I cut out most of it. It has a huge cliffy, *hint hint* so be sure to keep reading! It'll be out in two or three days. After that, I'll submit the next chapter (it's already done since my old chapter's been rejected so many times). See you later! Michelle. Report Review
i like it please keep writing and quickly!!Author's Response: I've already written the next two chapters, and currently one is already in the queue. It was rejected last time so I re-sent it. I hope it gets through! Then I'll put the next one after that one to the queue as well.
Thank you for sticking to this story! :) Michelle :) Report Review
I like the story. As you went on everything seemed tp get better and better. Though I still don't get why you put i the story 'Having a Father' because Harry technically doen't have anybody. Can't wait to read more, love the story!Author's Response: Don't worry, Harry's going to have a father soon, but the question is who? Also, is he going to like whoever is his new father? Keep reading to find out.
Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
Ron has got some nerve! He did deserve it! Anyway, love the story and Harry's character. I hope to read more real, real soon!!Author's Response: The next chapter's already waiting to be validated, so check back really soon! :) It'll have a mean cliffy at the end so be warned! ;) Report Review
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