Good! Still grammatical errors, but good!Author's Response: Thanks! Report Review
when will th madness end.cliffies and all.i loved itAuthor's Response: Yay! Yay! Yay! Report Review
good im guessing harry sonAuthor's Response: Thanx for reading, you shall find out if you're right very soon. Report Review
Overall, the typos were rather distracting but it was pretty good.
By the way, who would name their kid Coco? xDAuthor's Response: Thanks for reviewing, and I couldn't think of any other name that I hadn't either used or was planning to use, so don't give me **** about names, they're French, they may name their kids something like that. Report Review
nice. i like it a lotAuthor's Response: Thanks! I'm really glad that you like it.
I am not a huge Harry Potter fan, so I don't know who the guy is, but if you keep writing, I'll keep reading. As you can tell from my pen name, I am a tomboy, but i'm still a girl. So this boy and girly stuff isn't my style, but I don't really care. I want to see where this story goes.
.KEEP WRITING.Author's Response: Yeah I know it's not your style, it's mine. And I know you're not a huge fan, but thanks for reading any way! Report Review
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