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Reading Reviews for Harry Potter and The Darkness
  
4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by piper_weasley_24 Haunted dreams

17th January 2009:
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Review #2, by dramione 4 ever More questions then answers

10th October 2008:
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Review #3, by Highice007 Haunted dreams

3rd November 2007:
Story is still going strong, and very good character description. Interesting idea with Alex, and the “demon” inside him. Your dialog in conversation is very well done. I can actually picture the conversations verbally in my head. Kind of feels like the writing of an Anime, like “Death Note”
If I one Recommendation, it’s that you should keep inner dialog, like reflections, in past tense.

A moment in time that she still holds dear to her heart, turning the picture, a date is written on the picture. Reading nine years and four months prior to this day, she puts the picture back and opens the top drawer to her left. She pulls out a small ledger with the Ravenclaw crest on the cover. She opens to around the tenth or so page in where she begins to write.
A moment in time that she still held dear to her heart, she turned the picture to reveal a date written on the back. Reading nine years and four months prior to this day, she put the picture back and opened the top drawer to her left. She then pulled out a smaller ledger with the Ravenclaw crest on the cover. Finally Cho opened to around the tenth or so page in where she began to write.
The past tense makes the story flow more smoothly. You’re doing a great job, and I’ m going to keep on reading.
Cheers,
Highice007


Author's Response: I always have trouble with the tense in which i write. I'm going try and keep watch in later chapters.

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Review #4, by Highice007 Once Like Family

26th October 2007:
Very well done, youu got the discription down perfectly. I could actually picture it very well in my mind. Very discriptive. And Yea!!! Cho is in it, I'm so happy! Why did Alex get so many acceptance letters from the US? Is he an American? This chapter was great, if I have any advice it's only to remind you that Scottish people like Cho say mum instead of mom.
Well done.
Cheers,
Highice007

Author's Response: He is an American and quite intelligent due to years of learning under his father. He's also fierce and skilled fighter due to his training. Thanks for the note about "mum" I'm going have to change that when I get a chance. Thanks again for the review :)

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