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Review #1, by SiriusxRemus4life Night Is Near

6th March 2008:
Quite interesting. I imagine it might have been like that. Great job.

Author's Response: Thank you very much!
I am very glad you liked the read :)
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Quill88


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Review #2, by windchaser Night Is Near

4th November 2007:
this was good, just one thing :)
did voldemort know that peter was cakked wormtail?
lol, anyways, it was realllyyy good!!!

Author's Response: Well, in Goblet of Fire, he calls Pettigrew Wormtail... So.. here it is intended to be seen as a taunt and insult.
I'm very glad you liked it!
Thank you for the R&R!
Quill88


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Review #3, by Bella_Portia Night Is Near

6th October 2007:
I thought the dialogue was quite good. But I did think the story stopped too soon. I know this is conceived as a one-shot; but have you considered adding a chapter or two? It felt like you had more story to tell.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I was working extra hard on the dialogue on this story, because I thought it was quite essentiel. I have actually thought about additional chapters for this story, but we'll see if I can work something out... maybe I will, maybe I won't...
Thank you for reviewing!
Quill88


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Review #4, by goldentarheel Night Is Near

10th August 2007:
This is an interesting story, like how it depicts Pettigrew's betrayal of the Potters and Snape's feelings for Lily... and subtly refers to other things in DH like Dumbledore's pure-blood support...good job!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I´m rather proud of this story myself, so I´m very glad you like it! I wanted it to show how Voldemort decided to attack Harry and what happened immediatly before he went off. But I´m very glad you liked it!
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Quill88


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Review #5, by Lucy Morag Night Is Near

2nd August 2007:
Really like the story - really interesting that it's from Voldemort's point of view, also just a question - are you trying to aim for Voldemort having feelings for Bella?! Because that what it kind of sounds like in the middle

Author's Response: I´m very glad you liked it-it just popped into my head the other day. Yes, I also liked it written from Voldemort´s point of view- I was very pleased with this one...
As for Voldemort having feelings for Bella- no, not feelings like that. More possessive feelings; she is HIS Bella. In DH she is described talking to him as if to a lover at one point, and he is described as seeing her as "his most faithful lieutenant" by Harry´s observation that is. I wasn´t aiming for him to have romantic feelings towards her, but more a possessive feeling- like he does with everything else.
I´m very glad you liked it!
Thank you for reviewing!
Quill88


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