that brought tears 2 my eyes.lovely story and the inscription was extremely touching. Report Review
*sob* I held back my sobs until that inscription, gosh I couldn't cry at that? sad but beautifully written. I love it, and ignore the negative reviews, trust me I get them a lot. When I finished writing Hallelujah everyone was like "what the f*** you killed Ginny, what's the matter with you!" and I lost a lot or readers, people are just mean, but no matter what they say trust me, this is an amazing story, you get my highest praise, you made a great point and a solid storyline in just a single chapter which is hard to do. Keep writing, you've got talent
~~Lily~~ Report Review
This was so sad! Harry is usually the one that dies in fics like these, not Ginny. That surprised me a little. It was very emotional and well written, with a few typos here and there; just small errors. I have one question: Ginny was pregnant in her sixth year..? or have you changed the time of the battle? Either way that struck me as a little shocking... But very poignant and heartfelt! Great job!Author's Response: it's set after her life at Hogwarts. maybe i should have made that clear O_o
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so sad :(
she wasnt supposed to diee...Author's Response: she was in this story :P but when i was writing it, i was crying - i'm such a cry baby Report Review
It's so sad! I was literally in tears! But that also means that it's really good too.Author's Response: Thankyou so much Report Review
Very nicely written...a real tear jerker fic.
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you liked it Report Review
It is a good story. I saw a few typos, mostly some of them were just suffixes that were left off or plurals of a word. It had a lot of emotion in it. 9/10. Author's Response: Thanks for coming over and reviewing. Yep, I'll get working on those words. Report Review
OH- MY- GOD! You did such a good job! Good work! But you made me cry. If I was a user for this site this would be my favorite story!!! Once again good job!
I would give this a 10!! :)Author's Response: I feel so touched. Thanks for this review. Defiantly going on my top ten reviews Report Review
ur story is good and not to mention tearful too!Well Done!Author's Response: yes it is terful. Thanks for the review Report Review
This is really sweet, but sad!Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Yes it is sad Report Review
wow. its very sad.
you should add more about before she died.like her last moments with harryAuthor's Response: Yes, i know it's sad. I'm thinking about changing this to a short story. Report Review
AWESOME!...Author's Response: Glad you liked it Report Review
I like it, very touching, and true harry emotion and characterAuthor's Response: Thanks. I'm glad i captured his emotion and character Report Review
This is really good! Sad, but good! I almost felt like crying! :^( Poor Harry! Poor Ginny! She was pregnat too?! That really sucks... poor Harry lost his girlfriend and his child! So sad :^(.
Anyway, awsome work on the story.
10/10Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I cried while writing it. Yes, Harry lost his girlfriend, and his un-born child Report Review
I can't stop crying! I love it, but at the same time I hate it. I hate it because, well, Ginny died along with her unborn child. But, when I read it, I actually felt the pain Harry was bearing deep in his heart engulf me. The writing skills are very good, as well the ability to create the reader to feel as if they were the person. A very good quality no doubt. I still absolutely love it.Author's Response: Whoah. I'm sorry you hate it, but I'm glad you love it. I'm sorry that I made you cry, I was crying while I wrote it :'(! Report Review
Oh who cares if you don't think this is good? I loved it! Absolutely loved it. Please write more. I'm so sad from it all!!Author's Response: I'll try to write some more. I'm glad you loved it. Why are you sad? I didn't attend for it to be sad. Report Review
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