very, very good! please continue with it! i loved it!Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing--I adore feedback, especially such an encouraging example!
I have, in fact, continued this story; it's posted on my account as "Fire and Water." (because I was too stupid to figure out how to add chapters, lol!) Report Review
That was excellent! Your descriptions are great and you handle emotions really well. I can't think of anything else to say except that you've written an awesome piece here!Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I have been a fan of your work as well--following "Silence" for several months now. You are going to continue it, right? The last I read was chapter 10, when Draco was born. I don't mind that his birthday isn't canon !) I just want to read more!
Thanks again--I really appreciate positive feedback from one of my favorite writers! Report Review
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Brilliant and completely believable... you seem to really understand Lucius and Narcissa. Great stuff.Author's Response: Thanks, I appreciate your comments! Yes, Lucius/Narcissa stories are pretty much all the fanfiction I bother to read (or attempt to write); I find those Blacks and Malfoys by far the most interesting characters of the series! Report Review
That was amazing! I love Lucius/Narcissa. Keep up the good work! Author's Response: Thanks so much! Report Review
that was so good i really loved you did a great job. Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
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