Can't wait to read more. need to find out about Neville. Please update soon! Report Review
This is good stuff. It curbs my Harry Potter appetite. Report Review
Harry should run for minister and then all the world's problems will be solved! YAY! Loving it btw, update soon! Report Review
Well done! I really liked this chapter, it was really cute! 10/10 Report Review
UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATEAuthor's Response: I’m not dead. Au contraire, I’ll be picking up this story again as my summer project. So for those of you who have been patient with me, You have my eternal gratitude And within the next three days, expect the long-awaited Chapter 5. Xoxo yours truly Report Review
THIS IS AN EXCELLENT STORY! PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON!Author's Response: I’m not dead. Au contraire, I’ll be picking up this story again as my summer project. So for those of you who have been patient with me, You have my eternal gratitude And within the next three days, expect the long-awaited Chapter 5. Xoxo yours truly Report Review
I really like this story so far, it would be great to see a bit of harry with teddyAuthor's Response: I’m not dead. Au contraire, I’ll be picking up this story again as my summer project. So for those of you who have been patient with me, You have my eternal gratitude And within the next three days, expect the long-awaited Chapter 5. Xoxo yours truly Report Review
I really love this story, like a lot. I mean it's one of the only Harry Potter Fan stories I actually like, but I'm getting bored of the first four chapters, I've read them all about a thousand times! I need to know what's happening! :) ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥Author's Response: I’m not dead. Au contraire, I’ll be picking up this story again as my summer project. So for those of you who have been patient with me, You have my eternal gratitude And within the next three days, expect the long-awaited Chapter 5. Xoxo yours truly Report Review
amazing story, keep it up. your writing style is amazing. i'm glad you haven't put scorpious in gryffindor or albus in slytherin or something that would never happen like that! Author's Response: I’m not dead. Au contraire, I’ll be picking up this story again as my summer project. So for those of you who have been patient with me, You have my eternal gratitude And within the next three days, expect the long-awaited Chapter 5. Xoxo yours truly Report Review
Wow, this story just keeps getting better. Please tell me the next chapter is coming soon! Will Harry ever forgive Malfoy? What WAS Neville doing? Excellent suspense and writing technique. Well done, I'm glad both Albus and Rose are in Gryffindor, and Rose isn't in love with...Scorpious. Ew. I'm so sick of that whole thing. It's cool how you play up the whole, 'James (Harry's son) takes after James (Harry's dad), and Albus takes after Harry. Great! Great! Great! Keep writing, and hurry!Author's Response: thanks so much! i will! Report Review
Excellent. The writing style is very similar to J.K.R.'s. Sad about Hermione's parents though.Author's Response: thanks! that's what i was aiming for Report Review
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE please jib school stuff FANFICTION IS THE FUTURE i dont really get the american education system so i dont know what our equivilent of senior year is BUT WHO CARES this is a fantastic fic AND EVERY NIGHT I CHECK TO SEE IF IT HAS BEEN UPDATED *cries* and it never is *sobs* please update soon xxAuthor's Response: it will be soon, love! i just never have time to get on anymore because im a high school senior and it sucks up my existence. Report Review
i love this story! please update soon!Author's Response: Please let everyone know, on my behalf, that I will update as soon as I can! My senior year is proving to be hectic but as soon as I have the chance, I'll update. I haven't abandoned this story! Report Review
ick...that was an uncomfortable moment at the malfoy manor. 10/10! great writing!Author's Response: thanks! Report Review
i'm so excited to read more in about 20 seconds! 10/10!Author's Response: haha thanks so much Report Review
are you gonna mention scorpius! i love scorpius, he's so nice, unlike his father...10/10!!!Author's Response: but of course I am! Report Review
UPDATE SOON PLZAuthor's Response: I WILL =D Report Review
o interesting! Great writing! :) and great job! From light_blueAuthor's Response: thanks! Report Review
omg! i just started reading this story, and i absolutely love it! i love how you write James and Al and, everybody for that matter! i can't wait to see what trouble the "Jr. Mauraders" will be making...lol! update soon!! 10/10Author's Response: Thank you so much! Report Review
Cool chapter!Author's Response: thanks! Report Review
Ooh, Harry's anger was REALLY in character, so great job! Once again, love this fic!Author's Response: That was a tricky scene to write and thank you for complimenting that in particular! Report Review
i ADORE James Potter. Both of them. Great chpater! I wonder what the letter said. This is going in my favs!Author's Response: Thank you very much! Report Review
Wonderful! I always hated the soap-flavored ones... Great job!!Author's Response: haha thanks! Report Review
hmmm Neville in the headmistresses office...what will unfold??Author's Response: Guess we'll have to wait and see ;) Report Review
Hahahahhaha, very funny! I love all the bits about the next generation using the cloak and map. Its great to see McGonagall etc deal with them.. I love all the mentions of George, Fred, etc.. Lol, great job!Author's Response: Thank you very much! Report Review
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