OMG!OMG!OMG!*dramaticvoice*Why is Poppy in the rubble?!Is she really dead?!Will she and Sirius be reunited?! DUN DUN, DUN DUN DAN,DUN DUN DUUUN! Really sweet story! Hey, *light bulb apears above head* you are going to have them be reunited? Report Review
hurry up plz u rock i think poppy should come back to life Report Review
OMG this is amazing!! Please continue as soon as possible!! Report Review
Ah! This is such an amazing story, I still love it. And more cliffies?! Bah :D haha *goes to read chapter 18*
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I really hope you do eventually finish the story, kay? You are such an amazing writer, it would be such a shame to not know how the story ends.
HEERS CHEERS SNAPS TO CHAPTER 23
TWENTY THREE 23 TWENTY THREE 23 Report Review
Well I have been writing for a few years now and I have some advice to give. There are many ways to improve your use of words, create less spelling errors, and make your reader be sucked into the story. If you copy you story to a word document, word usually underlines in red what words are spelled wrong, and thesauruses can help your use of words. To get readers attention, be descriptive and relate things to their life. For example: Poppy sighed and leaned on Sirius's shoulder. The starry night sky was plain compared to the perfect person beside her. Report Review
oh god i just cant bear the bloody suspense please be quick
oh and yeah i love your story
Keira Report Review
What is going on in the world!!
She can't be dead. She just can't.
Poor Sirius. Oh my goodness.
What a cliffie! This is madness!!!
On a happier note, this chapter, as well as the rest of your story, was extremely well written.
I liked the little bit of humor that was thrown in the last chapter to sort of lighten the mood. Make it not so dismal.
But this one was like BAM. Tragedy.
I'm waiting on the edge of my seat for your next chapter.
Don't torture me too long!
-Blaze Report Review
WOw!! Great chap!! Amazing chap, to be exact. Small thing. Chaoter was a bit short, that's all. Report Review
First, the duel thing was a bit obvious, adding the "we must bow" thing, but apart from that, good chap!! Report Review
ah, Regulus in action! I loved this chapter but you took your time. I'd already given up on this story, thinking it was abandoned. I'm incredibly glad you haven't abandoned it though, the story is much too good for that. Please update soon. Report Review
Crap, no news on Poppy. James and Lily on their way to rescue. And brothers are the best, though can be on the dark side. Sirius on his way to rescue. Hopefully enough, it's not too late.. Report Review
What? No. No no no NO! You can't do that, it's their dreams and they are sadly becoming true. Not good. Report Review
So much new information, it's overwhelming. Life or death, everything's on the stakes here. Report Review
Poor Sirius and Remus... And her parents were death eaters? Well... Questions unasked need answers. Report Review
It was a great New Years ruined by the time coming... Sirius has got to saw her. Report Review
Awww, the gifts were wonderfully sweet! Too bad, nothing good is to come now. Report Review
Ooh, a make-up, kiss and *cough* more. They are happy and in love though, everything's wonderful. Report Review
So Sirius slipped into depression mode. He's not the one that almost died, he should be she's still with him. Report Review
Awww little stuff about James and Lily... So sweet. Love huh? Report Review
Close to death again... No protection? Sirius does his best. Stay well Poppy. Report Review
He really loves her; Ã¼ber sweet. And Christmas and steady girlfriend? Wonderful. But the trophy, keep her safe dear Sirius. Report Review
Aww such a cutesie ending... Perfect couple and Sirius is so sweet. Report Review
Ooh, they are officially together; how sweet. Stupid Snapw to ruin everything good. Report Review
Phahaha. Sorry, last line was funny, she might not speak the truth. So sad she has to be like a slave. Report Review
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