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333 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Ms V Misconceptions

21st June 2011:
I like this story a lot but I just noticed you haven't updated in around 3 years! What's up with that? I hope you update this or change the status to abandoned so we don't get are hopes up.

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Review #2, by Laughing_My_Tail_Of Misconceptions

29th September 2009:
PLEASE update soon !!^^ i loved the story and teddy/victorie are perfect the way you describe them. Cant wait!

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Review #3, by Fedex Misconceptions

9th June 2009:
OHMYDAYS YOU NEED TO GET THE NEXT CHAPTER UP LIKE SOON!!

i love it!! it's nice to see everything from teddy's pov for once, normally they switch arou ad stfff but i like this more!

yeah hurry uppps!!



love from Fedex X

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Review #4, by rougette Misconceptions

4th March 2009:
Please update soon! I read the whole story in a day and I fell in love! Haha, please write soon (:

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Review #5, by weasley_gang Misconceptions

12th December 2008:
pls

pls

pls

update soon!! =D i luv this story and soz i didnt review before but i was just so eager to continue!! =]

pls update soon!

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Review #6, by When are you gonna update? Misconceptions

22nd November 2008:
Don't tell me your gonna abandon this story cause many, many people are still waiting for the ending. Oh, I hate you - in the best-est way ( You're not updating fast enough) . I just love this story! Don't you dare leave this story, haha.

:) Just update, please?

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Review #7, by julia Misconceptions

3rd October 2008:
Liked it.
Are u planning on updating?
Would be awesome!
:)

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Review #8, by LupinFan45 Misconceptions

7th June 2008:
i hert David cook too!!! my sis made up: David COOK will boil David ArchuLETTUCE

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Review #9, by LupinFan45 Too Much Eggnog

7th June 2008:
idk about the homey thing. . . .

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Review #10, by anonymous Misconceptions

7th June 2008:
great story - one of my favourites! - please keep the chapters coming!!

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Review #11, by LupinFan45 Dates, Breaks and No-Name Cats

7th June 2008:
weird dream. . . . .but great story!

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Review #12, by LupinFan45 Imperfection is a Beauty

7th June 2008:
OMG!!! i am a HUGE harry potter and twilight series fan too!!! we have alot in common!!!. . .

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Review #13, by LupinFan45 Damn All These Beautiful Girls

7th June 2008:
lol, so ur TJ too. . . then?

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Review #14, by LupinFan45 Suave Teddy

6th June 2008:
lol, i think its fine my cuosni and his gf are 2 years apart.

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Review #15, by LupinFan45 Nice Talking to You

6th June 2008:
ooh!!! teddy and "vicky" heatin' up!!!

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Review #16, by henryjones Misconceptions

3rd June 2008:
ummm... bob the builder what? awesome though, i must admit. bob the builder can we fix it? bob the builder yes we can!
ummm... so sad ending what? poor victoire! i dont even know what happenned but im sure its real sad! ummm, what else? oh, you should put in more lily. because shes awesome. and ginnys awesome too. for the part with the champagne and staring at harrys bum. hehe.
update soon! write a ton about lily! ;)

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Review #17, by henryjones (again. sorry.) Too Much Eggnog

3rd June 2008:
so i totally reviewed before i read the whole chapter. that was pretty stupid. and then i went on to the next chapter and read like half of it before i realised that i had missed part of this chapter. im not exactly what you would call technologically adept.
anyway, last part of this story - rawr! harry is delightfully oblivious and lily isnt there! and it made me want chocolate chip cookies... and hot guys to snog...

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Review #18, by henryjones Too Much Eggnog

3rd June 2008:
wooohooo! lilys back!
and im so glad im not "popular" so i dont have to put up with ppl like teddys friends.
-Victoire looked like she would rather be anywhere but there. It was at that moment, that Teddy felt genuinely at home.- so i love this part because teddys so totally sadistic. hehe. now that other ppl are incedibly awkward, i feel at home! hehe. btw, i dont agree with your definition of family. family is the ppl who laugh their heads off at you when you fall down the stairs, and then they make you laugh so you forgive them.

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Review #19, by henryjones Dates, Breaks and No-Name Cats

3rd June 2008:
omg, so when i studied chemistry back in the day (what am i saying? it was only last year!) i had this long complicated saga/dream about racist elements that lynched oxygen for being so irregular... it was intense...
anyway, about this chapter. it was cool. the cats name is cool. i was sad the lily wasnt in it...

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Review #20, by henryjones Imperfection is a Beauty

3rd June 2008:
so lily continues to be really awesome. for some odd reason, shes my favorite character. which doesnt really make sense because this is her second appearence and she isnt really a character... but she my fave.
so are teddy and vicky (sorry i like it...and it makes their names rhyme.which is awesome) like real werewolves (sorry, just reminded me of pinocio... hehe) or like half werewolves... because bill weasely wasnt even a real werewolf...

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Review #21, by henryjones Damn All These Beautiful Girls

3rd June 2008:
so you forgot the people who were supposedly dead not being dead, or whole seasons turning out to be dreams... ahhh, the joys of soap operas...
anyway, i got nothing to say bout this chappie. so ill shut up and read the next'un. yeehaw.

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Review #22, by henryjones Suave Teddy

3rd June 2008:
dude, so even though ive already read this, im totally excited for the next chapter, because in the authors note you said it would be like an all my children marathon. and is there anything better than soap operas?
btw, i love your authors notes in the middle of the story. there awesome.

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Review #23, by henryjones Nice Talking to You

3rd June 2008:
so im back! this time to annoy you pretending to know about writing! so my inteligent literary critique is that this sentance -Standing at six feet two inches, Teddy put on a clean pair of robes and his shoes- bothers me. i feel like the first part should get paired up with an action in the second part. idk.
and continuing with the whole annoying-criticizing-reviewer thing, i think tonks was brunette. and that teddy appears to have only one roommate... the way you introduced lance as his roommate without naming anyone else...
btw, this was an awesome chapter. i love lily potter. just for drawing a sparkly heart. i dont know why, but it seemed really awesome. and i had this whole image in my mind of awesome sparkly hearts, which was awesome...
anyway, now im done...

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Review #24, by henryjones Introduction

3rd June 2008:
so i never reviewed this before, even though i read it and now since you updated i thought id reread it and now i feel guilty. so im reviewing! woot! its really very exciting.
anyway, so i dont actually have anything interesting to say, only that i liked teddys response to TJ (that name is officially too complicated for lazy ppl like me who get confused when typing chinese names. im going to assume its chinese from the wong, but...). as in the line - “It was more like physical assault,” - it was pretty sweet.

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Review #25, by Sarah_Bee Misconceptions

28th May 2008:
yay! An update! I love this story! I feel bad for Teddy. I know what it's like to like someone and they don't like you back the same way at first. Very good chapter. I wonder if Chucky did anything to upset Victoire. A break up maybe?

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