OK, so I can somewhat understand your use in names. Very well written, though a sad ending on Hermione's behalf. Oh, and Ione could be any of the following...
- A Hurricane from 1995
- A city in California, Oregon, Or Washington
- An Actress
The most likely though are
- A type of Orchid
- A sea nymph (Nereid) from Greek mythology
Do I win? DO I WIN!Author's Response: Thanks for the review i'm so glad so many people like it. I know it's a tad sad but Hermione does have everything Harry does in a way.
As for Ione's name I never thought anyone would look so far into it. But i do have to say that you looked a little too far into it. In fact the origin is right in front of your nose! Her-my-IONE!
hehe i couldn't help myself. But it does show that Harry hasn't really let go as he appears to have. He hasn't forgotten her!
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I thought that this story was very well written and I couldn't stop reading it! I loved it! XD Check out meh story! I only have one review. Tell your friends if you like it! I'll tell mine about yours! Author's Response: Thanks so much - i'm generally review deprived so i know how you feel! You have no idea how good it makes me feel knowing it was relatively 'unputdownable'
anyway thanks again! and i'll check out yours!
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good story sad but good Ione Report Review
Very interesting story plot, just enough to make us want more. Riva definately seems to be able to hold her own. Report Review
Good Story...Keep em' comin' Report Review
are james and harry the same person?
i like this story! it has a good plot. but james evans is an obvious name. lol. and did he cover up his scar? well, good chapter anyway! update soon!!! Report Review
What happens. come on! I hate cliffhangers!
Great idea by the way...
One thing though. I cant see Harry taking the name "James Evans" if he was trying to lie low. Everyone knows what Harry looks like, and what his parents names were. You also didn't mention if he was wearing a disguise or not (did you?).
If he wasn't, anybody who saw a black-haired, green eyes boy with a scar on his head, going by his fathers first name and mothers maiden name - attending parties.
Well, he wouldn't stay undercover for long.
Oh, by the way, I'm an Australian. Thank you for having Harry move here ;)
Looking forward to your nest post!Author's Response: Thanks for the review, as for all the problems - you'll see when the other chapters are up. A fair few of your questions are answered in the next chapter, which is in the queue at the present time. The others have to wait until the final conclusion. Dont worry the story's only 5 chapters long so, it's not that bad i suppose. Report Review
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