{reviewid: 2093734, reviewer: 'Nik'}
10th April 2009:
I'm really enjoying this story! Its a good pace with just enough description to picture it, but not to much to start to bore me. Hopefully you'll keep writing!
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{reviewid: 1569645, reviewer: 'none'}
12th August 2007:
Not bad. I liked seeing Lily and Severus acting like real kids - pretending to make potions - nice touch.
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{reviewid: 1569568, reviewer: 'essenni'}
12th August 2007:
good. It's interesting and easy to read it.
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{reviewid: 1567218, reviewer: 'Feather3'}
11th August 2007:
It's really good. More? :D
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{reviewid: 1566909, reviewer: 'black%20enchilada'}
10th August 2007:
very interested to see where this goes!!!
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{reviewid: 1541767, reviewer: 'Sarchale'}
30th July 2007:
really good! u should do the rest quickly!
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{reviewid: 1540818, reviewer: 'miri'}
29th July 2007:
I feel sorry for severus...but it's a good story... I'm curious to find out more :)
please continue as soon as possible :D
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{reviewid: 1539660, reviewer: 'Rena'}
28th July 2007:
poor Severus. his father is so cruel!! but im glad Lily is nice to him. please continue!!!
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