interesting. . . .I look forward to more of this!

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You're my hero. Percy Weasley needs attention, I'm glad you're writing about him!

Author's Response: Thank you! I agree completely, Percy has been thrown aside. haha

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love it.

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I absolutely loved seeing the Burrow from Percy's point of view! In the books, obviously it was always from Harry's point of view, and he adored the Burrow -- but not Percy, and that was really interesting to see. Yes, yes, he is a prat (you write him so well!), but I can't help loving him. This family conflict stuff is great, and the Fitzgerald quote at the beginning was perfect. Keep up the great work!

~Leah

Author's Response: Thanks so much! That's exactly the point I was trying to get out. That to others the Burrow is this wonderful family setting, yet to Percy it's a hellhole. Thanks for the review!

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Haha, I knew I was going to love this story! Holly seems to be absolutely everything Percy despises, and in the world of romance, that means she's perfect for him! I can't wait to see where you're going to take these two...

~Leah

Author's Response: lol, thanks so much! Keep checking in for updates

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Good chapter!
Keep writing

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Good chapter. I'm interested in seeing what happens next.

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excellent start to the story, its coming along nicely for just two chapters. You have percy put excellently in character. I don't think anyone has done a first person about percy so congrats to being original. I'll be watching for your next update ;) so make it soon

Author's Response: I know! Percy is hardly ever in fan fics because he's just so unlikable but that's EXACTLY why I loved writing his character.

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A STORY ABOUT PERCY? Never, have I ever, read one. And now, I am. Well, I like it so far. He's so prattish and whatnot, it kind of makes me laugh. Poor thing, so lonely. Haha, and I like Holly. I can't wait to see where this 'top-secret' story of yours goes, although now it's not really 'top-secret' but still. 10/10 (:

Author's Response: HAHAHA he sooo is and I'm really excited to write more about Holly...she's just so opposite from him. Thanks for the review!

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Percy is such a prat! LOL

I'm always up for a story that ignores DH (it was SO depressing!) and am looking forward to watching Percy get his comeuppance.

Author's Response: Most definitely. He's going to be one of those characters that you grow to hate and yet love at the same time.=] Thanks for the review!

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Do you know how hard it is to find Percy-centric fics? As you're writing one, I'm sure you do. I've always thought that it would just take Percy some time to get over his git-like tendencies, and when he did, he would be a wonderful man. I can't wait to see where you're going to take him in this story of yours. It's a good start, and I'll be checking for updates often!

Author's Response: Thank you sooo much. I've honestly havent seen much of Percy on this site but then again it is called Harry Potter Fan Fiction...BUT I'm sooo excited to write this. Thanks for the review!

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The first chapter is good and the story seems interesting! :D I hope this prat will change at the ende! ;)

8/10

Author's Response: Perhaps, we'll find out in the end....

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