ur use of referance (the 5th MOVIE) is very disterbing which do u fid better the books orthe movie please know ur life does depend on the answer even if u do just reply 2 ur self since u cant reply 2 me.ill know! :P

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OMG!!
I'm literally crying the ending is so beautiful!
They're going to heaven to be together forever, with no-one to ever come between them.
Draco saved Ginny didn't he? If he did I think you should make it a little bigger if you know what I mean, like more emphasis on it.
Utterly Spectacular.

xo

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I really like this story -- it was very touching. My only complaint is that it moved a little bit too fast, near the end or so. But overall, I thought it was wonderful!

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I'm not exactly sure what to say. I think you need to work on this story a bit more. You should describe events MUCH more instead of saying that they arrived at hogsmead by carriage, explain it. And I also don't think that there would have been carriages waiting for them since McGonogal told them to stay.

I love one of your other stories so I'm supposing you wrote this a long time ago and have inproved your writing since then.

I love the plot. It's very sad but sweet. You just need to work on describing things instead of telling us what happened.

Show us, don't tell us.

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That is so sad! (Cry) Great story loved it.
10/10 ( * O
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oh thats so cute... very good...


100/10 :):)

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Cute...

Actually, it is not a bad little story.

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Hmm! That was interesting. I liked it until that last part with them dead. Maybe cause that's not how I imagine death, I don't know. :&)

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This is the best story i have read so far and i at least cried it was very moving and very touching, nice work gryffindorgirl153

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Great job, well done. This is such a cute/sad/happy story!!
I saw that you made banners, they are extremely well done. please and thank-you
harrypotterfreak1414/hotmail/com
-hpf14

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AW! That was really cute! I loved it. Keep writing!

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super story, you are very good at writing!

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awww... really really great!

i just didnt understand this one line
//He made his way down to their common room and say that it was 9//

i read it like a billion times and i still didn't understand.
care to explain?

xx
leigh

Author's Response: whoops. sorry, typo :P i think its supposed to be and saw that it was. instead of say

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this is the most romantic story that i have read and i have read a lot of them. i'll give that story a 10/10

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oh my god that was a great story ! it was soo sad but beautiful so very beautiful. BRAVO!

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i have just one thing to say: WOW
this is an amazing story!!!
i'm crying and crying and i just can't stop!
i LOVE that story!
greetings,
Laura

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lovely...utterly butterly lovely

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aw that was so sweet i loved it.!

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ITS A LOVELY STORY... ITS A SHAME THE DIED *BOO-HOO*

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Wel...Okiie, dont yell at me...I thought everything was great. Perfect, in fact.rigt until They left to go to Malfoy Manor...you kinda just fell apart. Nothing was elaborated, and everything seemed like it was rushed.I thought it was good, except for that part. Anyhoo, 8.7/10

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seriously, i like cried when Hermione died.
I love the ending. exellent
=)

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why cudnt hermione and draco kill lucius instead of it being the other way around

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AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAH. that's funny. that's really funny. i dont think you intended it to be, but that's just too funny.

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ah that is so sad and too many people are being buried at hogwarts soon it's going to be a cementary and a school not just a school! but i love it

mrs. weasley

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that is SO sweet.

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