Very cute =] And I love the last line: '"...the poor kid'd get picked on."' =D Kat x.Author's Response: Thank you! I felt like ending on a lighter note to balance out the heavy feelings - I'm happy to hear you liked it, too. Report Review
This was.. amazing. It was written beautifully, the characters emotions vivid and understandable (or realistic more like). The characterization was on spot and I loved following those who had in many ways been parents to Harry. Splendid idea. Didn't want it to end, honestly. I feel utterly speechless to be truthful, but better to comment something than nothing. This is going straight to my favourites =) Author's Response: Ohh, thank you so much! I'm glad you liked the idea as much as I did ... truthfully, I fell in love with it and it wouldn't let me go until I wrote it. =) Report Review
nice.. LOVE the comment at the end: "...Probably as a middle name, though, the poor kid'd get picked on." i LOVE it Author's Response: I wanted to end on a slightly less depressing note, so I'm glad that worked for you! And tying back into the series is always fun. =) Thanks! Report Review
funnyAuthor's Response: Aww, thanks! Humor is a tough point for me to get across subtly. Report Review
I really really love it! I thought it was very interesting to show all of the father figures, and then finish with Harry becoming a father. It's a different sort of fanfic that really captures the different relationships. PS. Hufflepuff Reviewing Circle :DAuthor's Response: HRC!! My favorite project. Report Review
Really well written. It's quite stuffed with emotion, and you've captured it perfectly. The little conversation (thingy) with James and Harry was so sweet, bitter sweet I suppose. It was so hard reading that, knowing that it'd never be possible. Anyways, I thought the description was spot on...everything that needed mention was, but nothing was overly spelled out. And you couldn't have finished it in a nicer way (^_^) I grinned when I read that, it changed the mood...made the future seem much less bleak. I really enjoyed this, you've done a fantastic job capturing the characters, and telling the story. yep (^_^) -OllyAuthor's Response: I just love the idea of James as a dad, as I imagine Lily wouldn't let him anywhere near Harry unless he matured up a bit more. I was so afraid of over-explaining some parts, because things like Peter's dad or whoever had to be specifically mentioned for it to tie in to the fatherly theme. I had mixed feelings about the ending, but I'm glad it worked for you and turned around the depressing mood. Thanks so much for your kind words! Report Review
This is an interesting one-shot. Please read and review my fic.Author's Response: I wish you would say why you found it interesting, as I found this review a little spammy without any real opinions, but I will consider reading your work. Report Review
Ah, I loved this. All the characters were great, even Peter, who might've actually been the most fascinating of the bunch. And the last line was perfect, seemed very James-like.Author's Response: I was just poking around your author page today. =) I really wanted Peter's to be substantial, not just the lame I-had-to-betray-them whining that seems to accompany him or, worse, completely skipping him. So, yeah. Glad you read it. Report Review
This story was amazing, not to mention beautifully written. You captured the emotions, the heart, everything so damn well. I find myself rather envious of your skill. It was beautiful and I loved the ending. Well, I loved the entire thing, but the ending was probably my favorite part, aside from the James moment. That was just adorable. Keep up the fantastic work!Author's Response: Thanks so much! I really wanted to get my post-DH emotions out, so I started working on this about an hour after I finished reading. I'm so glad I conveyed the emotions properly and gave them justice. Report Review
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