Wow, unfair much? lolz great chapter. I liked how you made the police officer fair, but still do his job. I also like the sarcastic girl.

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I like this story - you've got good ideas.

But if you want it to succeed, you need to spend a bit more time on it, fixing up mistakes and making it make more sense.

Unless you've abandoned it. Which I hope you haven't. But if you have, you can consider giving the storyline to someone else to finish.

x

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ttly realistic. i luv it!

Author's Response: thanks! :)

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this fic is great.. it grabbed my interest cos i'm australian.. and i'm guessing by the really great knowledge of the first fleet u are too ?
anyway i can't wait for another update cos it looks like it will be a really great story !

Author's Response: yeah i'm Aussie, but i have to admit, i did look up information for this fic! i wanted to make sure that the facts were right!

thanks for the review hun! *hugs*

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oh please put more up. i've seen this story a couple of times n thought yes it's ok i guess but then i actully read it wow i love it... it's easly in my top ten list...more please

Author's Response: oh thankyou!

i won't be updating this for a while, i want to finish loving you, hating you first!

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Love it. I'm curious to the rest, can't wait until she gets to Austria, but that will probably take a while because one doesn't just *pop* up in Austria, especially not in the 1700's when there were no airplanes or such. And I highly doubt Emily is a witch, so she can't apparate. And either way; as if they would let her do that.

Allright, I'm rambling again, just saying, I like the story. Well-written, easy readable, though you do miss some comma's, but that doesn't really bother me.

Author's Response: well it's Australia..lol

Thankyou for the review and i'm so glad you like it! updates will proberbly be slow for this story because i have another novella that i'm working on and i only currently have a few chapters written for this.

*hugs*

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