Wow, unfair much? lolz great chapter. I liked how you made the police officer fair, but still do his job. I also like the sarcastic girl. Report Review
I like this story - you've got good ideas.
But if you want it to succeed, you need to spend a bit more time on it, fixing up mistakes and making it make more sense.
Unless you've abandoned it. Which I hope you haven't. But if you have, you can consider giving the storyline to someone else to finish.
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ttly realistic. i luv it!Author's Response: thanks! :) Report Review
this fic is great.. it grabbed my interest cos i'm australian.. and i'm guessing by the really great knowledge of the first fleet u are too ?
anyway i can't wait for another update cos it looks like it will be a really great story !Author's Response: yeah i'm Aussie, but i have to admit, i did look up information for this fic! i wanted to make sure that the facts were right!
thanks for the review hun! *hugs* Report Review
oh please put more up. i've seen this story a couple of times n thought yes it's ok i guess but then i actully read it wow i love it... it's easly in my top ten list...more pleaseAuthor's Response: oh thankyou!
i won't be updating this for a while, i want to finish loving you, hating you first! Report Review
Love it. I'm curious to the rest, can't wait until she gets to Austria, but that will probably take a while because one doesn't just *pop* up in Austria, especially not in the 1700's when there were no airplanes or such. And I highly doubt Emily is a witch, so she can't apparate. And either way; as if they would let her do that.
Allright, I'm rambling again, just saying, I like the story. Well-written, easy readable, though you do miss some comma's, but that doesn't really bother me. Author's Response: well it's Australia..lol
Thankyou for the review and i'm so glad you like it! updates will proberbly be slow for this story because i have another novella that i'm working on and i only currently have a few chapters written for this.
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