Loved it even though it was sad :) Report Review
James is saching for hermione and tell her that he love her so much and hermione tell james that she love him so much that they find each other? some help plasise Report Review
AW! That was so sweet and sad. Seriously, you write SO GOOD! It's a perfect sad story. It's a perfect story.Author's Response: Wow, thank you! :) That was my first foray into fanfiction. :) Report Review
*sniffle* You're one of the best writers of tragedy I've ever come across on this site! James and Hermione ... now there is a pairing I never thought would be feasible, yet here you've written them as naturally and as beautifully as I could imagine. You write relationships so naturally - they're always gorgeous and never overdone - yet always tinged with a little bittersweet note. This was beautiful. 10/10Author's Response: Haha. The first time I read this review, I wondered if what you said was a compliment. One of the best writers of tragedy? :P But I'm happy you enjoyed this. James/Hermione is a rather uncommon pairing, and I wasn't too sure how people would actually take what I wrote, so I'm quite relieved that you liked how I wrote it. Again, thank you for all your reviews! :D Report Review
I loved it!=D You are a brilliant writer!Author's Response: Thanks. :) Report Review
Wow. I loved this, it was so beautiful. I was going to write a James/Hermione fic but know I could never do it justice after reading yours. It was truly touching and amazing.Author's Response: Thanks. I dropped by your Author Page and saw that you're a fan of James as well. Haha. In fact, I had read one of your stories! But hey, I'm sure you can come up with your own James/Hermione. Keep writing! :) Report Review
D: No, James James. I knew she would wind up bumping into Harry. Sigh! Gah! Lovely, lovely, as usual. And and yes! I feel so sad that Hermione can't be with James :[[ Good job!Author's Response: Wow, thanks for reviewing this as well. :D I'm glad you realised that the person in the end was Harry; some people got confused with it. Haha. :) Report Review
That was very different and interesting. Good job. The idea is very original and the story is well written.Author's Response: This was one of my earlier ventures into HP fan fiction. Thanks. :) Glad you liked it. Report Review
whoa! good story!! you know, i hadn't read any time-travel fics before, or stories where people from one era fall in love with those from another, and now i regret it. You're story was short yet so sweet (as a fanatical Romantic myself, i know a good romance story when i see one) and you're transition from James to Harry was great. Good job!Author's Response: Hi there! :) Thanks for allowing this entry for the challenge, for reading and also reviewing! Really? You haven't read any time-turner fics? Wow, there are a lot of good ones out there! :D Well, I'm so happy you liked it. :) Report Review
oh my gosh. that brought me to tears. The end when she thinks shes gone back to James and it's actually harry is just so awful. So this is what dying feels like. that line is so powerful.
You are a wonderful writer, and I'm hoping for a happier ending than this for never all together, which is one of my favourite fics.
emma x x xAuthor's Response: Hello! Thanks for reading that, haha. I wrote that to bounce off ideas for Never All Together, and I'm sorry it made you cry. Uhm, I don't know what to say with the happy ending thing. It depends on who's happy, I guess. :) Report Review
Wonderful story. "Just remembering the past" is one of the best last lines to a fan fic I have read. It certainly is better then "All was well."
The emotions her feel true. Superb job!Author's Response: Whoops. Haha. Never mind her ending; her whole series was terrific and was what inspired all of us to be here. Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed this. ;) Report Review
Awww! I'm sad now! This was very well written, and, as you're helping me to do, it flowed! I loved it immensely!
Rebecka M.Author's Response: Oh! I'm sorry for making you sad, but I'm glad you liked it. Haha. Glad you also liked the flow. Thanks for reviewing! ;) Report Review
This was really good! : )
Amazing. Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. :) Report Review
the story is good and the song fits but there is one little bitty problem however. THIS SONG IS SANG BY REBA MACENTIRE NOT CRAIG MORRISON AND THT OTHER PERSON.Author's Response: You double-posted. :) Report Review
the story is good and the song fits but there is one little bitty problem however. THIS SONG IS SANG BY REBA MACENTIRE NOT CRAIG MORRISON AND THT OTHER PERSON.Author's Response: Yes, I know, but those two composed it. Rules state that when one quotes a song he or she must credit it to the composers and not to the artists. :) Anyway, thanks for reviewing! :) Report Review
I didn't get the ending... was 'he' surposed to be harry... or James?
Good story though.Author's Response: He was supposed to be Harry. Note the 'green eyes'. Haha. :) Report Review
love it.Author's Response: Thanks! :) Report Review
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