I love the song love the way hermione dealed with it. But I don't like that they forgave him.lol Awsome job B.D.A Report Review
Oh well he was a jerk lol it bad enough we people cheat bu with best friends Lol Hugs Report Review
Not bad at all, but I found a mistake at the very end, when you said "...begin the rocky road of gaining Ron's trust." It should be "...begin the rocky road of Ron regaining their trust." Ron's the one who showed himself as untrustworthy, they don't have to gain his trust, he has to gain their trust back. 9/10 Report Review
That was really good! What Ron did was so wrong, but I'm glad the girls had Harry and Neville by their side. Report Review
I like this one! A little Ron bashing, Harry and Hermione getting together, ans lyrics to a song, my kind of one shot, lol!Keep up the Excellent work! -Tish Report Review
Hi! This song worked so perfectly with the plot you set out... I really enjoyed reading your story and I think I've read it before, so if I have reviewed already - Sorry... if I haven't - Sorry cause it deserves it Report Review
You know this can work into a 3-4 chapter story with how Ron will redeem himself. just a thought! dennisudAuthor's Response: hmm...i'll keep this in mind! Report Review
Thank you so much u got me hooked on this song... I thought that JKR should have made Hermione and Luna's friendship stronger, don't u? Gawd Ron is a butthole... Great song-fic 10/10Author's Response: thanx! yea...i always thought hermione and luna should have been closer...ron (imho) should have been kicked out of the "trio" long ago Report Review
wow that was greatAuthor's Response: thank you! Report Review
lol I loved it! I had to read it fast cause I am in a Library and It is closeing BYE Author's Response: thanx...i appriciate all reviews...u get a special thank u for being my 2nd reviewer on this fic... Report Review
I have to say, I never thought that this song could be used to make a Harry Potter Fic, but you have proved me wrong. *bows* i will repay you with the best rating I know how to give; A Gazillion/10 Sincerly, mrs_potter_13Author's Response: thank you so much! this fic. was fun to write. i started it out with a h/hr, h/g story in my head, but when i started writing, the words took on a life of their own... Report Review
Fantastically Awesome! it's one-of-a-kind!Author's Response: thank you!!! i luved writing this one...it was so much fun...when i first found the challenge the story started out as something else in my head...but when i started writing, the words took on a life of their own...lol thank you for the review... Report Review
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