Reading Reviews for My Father's Orders
104 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Crescent Moon  Chapter 20

15th March 2011:
Really, really good!! I loved it!!
You're an amazing writer!! :D

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Review #2, by Seriously_Sirius_Luver Chapter 14

26th August 2009:

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Review #3, by Jen Chapter 20

15th April 2009:
hi! this story started of really interesting and i found it very hard to stop reading. you have a great vocabulary and make great cliffhangers. it was shaping up to be a really good story, but in the end i got the feeling that it was kinda rushed. when i read your A/N i guess i understand, but with maybe one extra chapter your could have wrapped it up better and given this story some more flesh on the bone.
despite that i loved this story. i love the idea of voldemort having a daughter. and that he namned her summer. or maybe her mother did, before she died?
i hope everything gets better in your own reality, because your fantasy is amazing. keep up the good work!

sorry for bad english, i'm from sweden. cheers!

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Review #4, by Scarred And Bruised Chapter 10

10th March 2009:
I have to ask this, did they even have crack back than? That made me laugh so far I like this story.

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Review #5, by SamBlack Chapter 20

27th January 2009:
wait. did she die?
this ended far too soon. it was really rushed. bleh. didnt like it.

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Review #6, by SamBlack Chapter 17

27th January 2009:
sure i like sirius, but the lucius thing was interesting! bleh. . . . . i am currently swamped curiousness. fer sure.

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Review #7, by SamBlack Chapter 3

27th January 2009:
i love how original this is.

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Review #8, by Nymphadora Tonks_ Remus Lupin Chapter 20

21st March 2008:
aww cute 10/10:)


p.s lol yeah i really should deal with my reality to lol but i love this story

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Review #9, by Kimberly Chapter 20

8th March 2008:
Sad but exciting chapter.

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Review #10, by Kimberly Chapter 19

8th March 2008:
Lily, James and Remus are great friends.

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Review #11, by Kimberly Chapter 17

8th March 2008:
Cool chapter. the girl can kick ass.

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Review #12, by archaicawakening Chapter 20

4th March 2008:
Uh... what? I liked it, but the ending was a bit of a muddle...

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Review #13, by limelight1816 Chapter 1

15th February 2008:
It is a really nice story. The summary was good, that was what got me to actually read this.

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Review #14, by sammieoxox Chapter 20

23rd January 2008:
i dont really get this chapter and i kinda doute that Voldemort would allow her to date the OTHER black lol
this chapter is a bit confusing and rushed at the end
dont you think?

ANDD i kinda wanted at one point for her to say why she hated him for so long then them kiss spontaniously ~that would be perfect ;)

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Review #15, by Alice Cullen Chapter 20

20th January 2008:
love your story but who did she see at the end of chapter 20?

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Review #16, by Harry_Inu_lover Chapter 20

18th January 2008:
I dont get the ending.



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Review #17, by alyssa chan Chapter 1

16th January 2008:
It's good so far, but just for the record, Voldemort is not a pureblood.

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Review #18, by sorryxlove Chapter 20

14th January 2008:
thats very brave of you to come to that conclusion. I don't know if you'll ever get this review since you are not longer here. But good job. I loved this story.

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Review #19, by steph Chapter 20

13th January 2008:
Im kinda dissapointed by the ending it moved much to fast compared to the rest of the story. I understand ur reasons for ending it so soon but it doesn't stop the fustrations as a reader when a story ends adbrutely. Is Summer dead or is she just locked up then found by someone (sirius)? Anyway it was an enjoyable story that I looked forward to reading as the chapters were published. It was a well writen story that I enjoyed very much and am upset that it is ended, but I understand reality is much more important that fiction and i wish you good luck dealing with whatever your reality untails.

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Review #20, by Truth In Flight Chapter 20

9th January 2008:
That was an incredibly lovely ending. Hard to understand, possibly, but well done anyhow. I wish you the best of luck getting on with reality (I've never managed it =)

Author's Response: thank you so much. i know the ending was kind of rushed, but i tried. and thanks for the luck, i know i'll need it.

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Review #21, by blueangel02 Chapter 20

6th January 2008:
hey..i loved it all.but wat did u mean in the author note???u have to write a sequel...if there is one...please.

Author's Response: i just mean that i need to focus on reality for awhile, instead of throwing myself into fantasy. there isn't a sequel planned. i was going to extend it into my harry fic, but i abandoned that. thanks for the support though. i appreciate it.

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Review #22, by violetriddle Chapter 20

5th January 2008:
aww im sad u ended it.but i loved it

Author's Response: i'm sad too, but thanks.

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Review #23, by Bears Kitty Chapter 19

19th December 2007:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! (and longer chapters would be nice as well...)

Author's Response: the last one is longer.

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Review #24, by hairspray Chapter 19

18th December 2007:
omg, sooo interesting! update soon pleasee!

Author's Response: i'm glad you like it.
just now updated.

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Review #25, by blueangel02 Chapter 19

18th December 2007:

ok, so that's a lot god.but really oh my god..^_^

ok,so i read the whole thing before reviewing.i hated u for the malfoy part...but then i stopped hating u when u did the twist...

ok,so i think it was amazing,lol..

but i feel totally sad for sirius..(i'm a big sirius fan..that's why..)so i'm just gonna mumble because god knows when they'll get together(well actually even u do...*mumbles*

anyway i like it alot,lol...

update soon??^_^


Author's Response: awh thanks for the enthusiasm.
i appreciate it.
and the last chapters posted.

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