This is going really good! Better than my start at the same challenge, anyway...at least, I think so!
Keep going! I won't to read more! And more!
~ginny_malfoy22Author's Response: Okay, thanks! Sure, I'll have the next chapter up ASAP! :) Report Review
Wow. This is a great start. I really like Abbie, she sounds sooo real. And considering this is a challenge-fic where the OC is based of you, she is supposed to be real :D I love it so far. Definitely a favorite. Author's Response: Oh thank you! I haven't written anything for it in a while, but you've inspired me to. Thanks so much! The next chapter will be up ASAP! Report Review
Cool so far I look forward to the rest of the story!Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'll update as soon as I can! Thanks again for reviewing! Report Review
I saw your fanfic username attached to HermyJane's and decided I would come over and read yours. I read your Events of a Regretful Past story and now this one and your writing continues to improve. Your stories are completely captivating and I really like them. Keep up the awesome work and I cannot wait to follow this story. I love how it's not just another trio story. I think these characters will make for a great story.Author's Response: Aww, thanks! You'll motivate me to keep writing this story! Report Review
Yay, you did my challenge, and it's incredible! If they do end up going on this date, Abbie (aka you, I think) should go with Remus! Unless you are going to go with Sirius.I'm very confused though. I thought that this was a Sirius/You story. Never mind that, though. I'm sure you'll turn it around somehow ;D. Great job, please update soon!
DiandraAuthor's Response: Yeah, it is Sirius/Me, but first Eve is going to go for him, because she thinks he's the mischievious type. I'm not so sure she's gonna go for Remus, because I think it might be a little too cliche'd if I have her also go with a marauder. Report Review
OMG! Marauders! Finally. ^^
Hi, I’m Eva and at finally I’ll do what I promised, okay? Okay. I use to write and read at he same time so my reviews are strange sometimes, don’t take me too sirius-ly. :P
No train, whoa, that’s nice… (Almost all fics, especially Marauder era, starts with scene in the Hogwarts express). Woot. Eve. I’m Eva or Eve, it will be nice reading.
That Abbie girl is so nice and naïve, she must get together with Sirius, really. (Did I mention that I’m a Sirius fangirl?). But I like Eve better; she’s so like me, loud and audacious. Nice beginning, but I prefer longer chapters, because now it just seams similar to other fanfics, you could put more incidents, make first chapter longer and others could be shorter. But that’s only my opinion.
I suppose Abbie is main character, isn’t she? You could show her feelings more, maybe more doubts, and thoughts. She could be clumsy a bit, tear to peaces some glasses or test-tubes at Potions…
What could I say? 8/10, because I love Eve and would like to read more. Update soon and PM me when the nezt xhapter is out or just give me a sing in my thread, okay? Please. *puppy eyes* Good luck.
P.S. Oh, jerk me, I forgot to tell that grammar, style and language is very good.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked it! Thanks for the suggestions, but this is a challenge fic and I think I'm gonna keep my characters how they are. Thanks for R & R by the way! Report Review
Hey, I really like this!! It's very different from anything I've read before, can't wait for the next one!!Author's Response: Thanks so much! This is a really great review! I'm satisfied! :p. Lol Report Review
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