mm, i find this story very intriguing:] cant wait to read more; update!! Report Review
I love it, please write more soon! Great plot by the way. Report Review
This sounds like its going to be an awesome story. Report Review
verrryy interestin FUN N KISSES Report Review
I liked your story, even if it's only the first chapter. :P I hope you keep it up! Since you asked for advice, when it is asking a question you have put it like "Are you ready ?" where as it should be "Are you ready?". Oh, and the same with the full stops. Other than that, everything's fine to me. Cookies :-D Report Review
hey! i am really liking this begining. It sounds very realistic. :] i'm excited to see your story continue. -paige Report Review
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