Reading Reviews for A.J.A.T.F.O.H.
6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by its Joana the Prologue.

20th December 2007:
mm, i find this story very intriguing:] cant wait to read more; update!!

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Review #2, by materialgirl the Prologue.

17th November 2007:
I love it, please write more soon! Great plot by the way.

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Review #3, by WOW!! the Prologue.

10th August 2007:
This sounds like its going to be an awesome story.

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Review #4, by lollipop_marauderette the Prologue.

30th July 2007:
verrryy interestin


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Review #5, by Cookies the Prologue.

19th July 2007:
I liked your story, even if it's only the first chapter. :P I hope you keep it up!

Since you asked for advice, when it is asking a question you have put it like "Are you ready ?" where as it should be "Are you ready?". Oh, and the same with the full stops.

Other than that, everything's fine to me.

Cookies :-D

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Review #6, by paigeST the Prologue.

18th July 2007:
i am really liking this begining. It sounds very realistic. :]
i'm excited to see your story continue.

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