very cute...and very good.and i loved "What good is the rain Harry if there isn't even a rainbow?" it's so true...excellent jobAuthor's Response: It really is true isn't it. Opposition in all things, how can we know true joy if we never experience true sorrow. Thanks so much for the review! Report Review
This is a well-written story with good description and grammar/spelling (that is important otherwise it gets really annoying). Only thing is that after a speech marks there shouldn't be a capital letter ("You do?" She questioned should be "You do?" she questioned). Lol. Author's Response: Thank you! And I couldn't agree with you more on the grammar thing. I will make those changes. I think I just captilize out of habit when I'm in the groove. Thanks for pointing it out. Report Review
Aww, that was gorgeous!! I added it to my favourites!!Author's Response: Thanks. It is always an honor to be put into favorites! Report Review
~Hello~ I love it. Is this ur first story? 10-10. ~Jackie~ Author's Response: Super glad that you loved it! Thanks for the review. Actually this is the twelth story I have posted on the site! Report Review
Loved it. Keep it up. Author's Response: Thanks. I wanted to post this story before it was no longer cannon. Report Review
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