Need to know more! This chapter was brill and can't wait to see what the next one brings! 10/10

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Great story starter. Definitely leaves me wanting more. 10/10

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its really good please write more

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please update!!! its seems realy goood!!

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please update!!! its seems realy goood!!

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hurry up will you its been ages! but the story is brill i cant wait to find out what happens next but please be Quicker this time.


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plz update soon

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omg omg this is really good! please please update soon! 100-100

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omg this is really good! keep going! 100-100

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oo i definitely love it! please update super fast!!

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omg!
this is so good!
pls please PLEASE update soon
11/10

-looneylovegood

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hey there! I like the chapter and the story so far. [hm..I am new to this site, if you could answer to my review and tell me how I can see when you update...I'll be very greateful!]
Just a few questions: when was Harry kidnaped?[as in place and time...] Also when is this happening[after what year, what are the current relationshps...]?
I really like the story, hope you will update SOON!

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oh boy! keep the chapters coming!

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Wow, Ron has the dream? Cool. Usually it's like Ginny or whatever. Such suspense. lol. Great story, great chapter. You guys are great. 10/10 update!
~Alex

Author's Response: Yeah, Ron does have the dream. Well...Ron. Not Ginny. Haha. Thank you very much! [We're] glad you think so. Update will probably come in a week or so...thank you for reviewing! (:

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Oh, I'm really liking this, and I'm so glad that I added it to my favourites. Unfortunately, I don't have the time right now to leave a longer review, but I'll just say that I think your writing is quite good, and your portrayal of the characters is quite in-character, which is always something that I appreciate. I especially liked the bit of Sirius and Snape in this chapter.

I look forwards greatly to more.

~Megan

Author's Response: Oh, I'm glad you really like this! Thank you, I think me and Em work pretty well together, and I'm glad you think the combination is nice. I'm sure [we're] both glad that you think we do that, and there should be a new chapter coming after we sort out some thread. (:

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hey, i thought it is a reel good plot and i would like to read the whole thing so please can you update???

Author's Response: Thank you! Well, we need to wait for our second chapter to validate, but it should be coming soon! ^_^

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very good begining.cant wait 4 more.

Author's Response: Thank you! Ch. 2 is in validation, so you should have 'more' soon! Thanks for reviewing!

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i thought it was great and I can't wait to hear more of it .so UPDATE!
LOL

Author's Response: Thank you! Well, Ch. 2 should be coming out soon, so you'll find out soon! Thank you for reviewing!

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Ahh! That was good! :D But at the end...you know...you kinda stopped!!! I'm not a big fan of cliffies...lol. So update soon so I know who the "intruder" is... :D 10/10 for the first chapter...
~Alex

Author's Response: Thank you! Well, cliffies are quite handy things...you'll find out soon, Ch. 2 is currently in validation. Thank you so much!

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Congratulations great first chapter. I'm so looking forward to the next one!! Great Job.

Author's Response: Ooooh, thank you, Im supposed to be adding a few more scenes to it, but i am a slow writer :P

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This is a very good chapter. It's really well-written and is very descriptive. This story seems like it has a good plot, I can't wait for the next chapter. :)

Author's Response: Thanks hun ^_^ Steph and I are working hard on it :)

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