Interesting, please update soon!Author's Response: Thank you for the review. Report Review
This could be really interesting. Kinda slow though. Could use a bit more action. Oh, I updated my story. Chappie 9 is waiting to be validated. Keep writing this story. It seems like it could turn out really well.Author's Response: Thank you so much. Right now I'm trying to get other things done in my life so I hope to be updating soon. Thank you again for the review. Report Review
love the story update soon plz 1000/10Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. I hope to be updating soon. Keep Reading. Report Review
Good job so farAuthor's Response: Thank you for the review. Right now I'm working on the third chapter. Hopefully I'll be done soon. thanks again for the review Report Review
An interesting story idea, and I like the portkey airline ticket idea. Would they arrive at a secret terminal at O Hare, or Chic. Interntnl. airport? Put in some description, make the place alive with sights, sounds, people. Please try and fill in more details. Oh, and be careful of spelling errors. I will be keeping an eye open for more. Please feel free to see my story. Thanks. Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. The second chapter has more description and the third chapter will have more about the airport and everything else. Enjoy the story as it goes on. Thank you again! PS Thank for letting me know about the spelling errors. Report Review
I really liked it so far. I love the idea of the students going to America as an exchange program. Is this only open to year 7s or am I reading that wrong. If so then isn't Luna in Ginny's grade. Forgive me if I am wrong. Anyway I would most definetly like to read more. Great start.Author's Response: I know Ginny's in Luna'a grade, but don't worry she will show up later on in the story. I like Ginny and she needs to be in there sooner or later. Thanks for the review. Report Review
good start- just try to make it a little longer and full of informationAuthor's Response: Thanks!!!! I really tried but this my first fic. The next chapter will have more information. Thanks again!!!!!!!!!! Report Review
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