{reviewid: 2509186, reviewer: 'Crescent%20Moon%20'}
17th April 2011:
Lol!! I loved the ending XD
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{reviewid: 2321009, reviewer: 'LOLhaily'}
27th March 2010:
I like this. It's funny "Just making sure you have something down there," was the best part
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{reviewid: 2089756, reviewer: 'dAPHNE%2013'}
5th April 2009:
Awesome!! Loved it!! Trully explains (in a way) the begining and the how (s) of lily fallingi n love with james...
:)
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{reviewid: 2085254, reviewer: 'harry_ginny_3'}
29th March 2009:
Omg, I loved it!!!
That was such a great story line!
9/10
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{reviewid: 2060724, reviewer: 'nire'}
22nd February 2009:
HA! I loved this! Very cute towards the end there! I love that James gets frustrated with things and mumbles under his breath! And I love how he was complimenting Lily. It was sooo nice! :)
I love that Lily finally gave in.
I also liked how your portrayed Sirius, even though its only a little bit.
Very good overall! 10/10!
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{reviewid: 2058397, reviewer: 'brownie'}
18th February 2009:
love it! write another
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{reviewid: 2035964, reviewer: 'I_LOVE_love'}
19th January 2009:
Well, I definitely like it!! And I'm gonna have to check out that sequel too!! ;) Good job for your James/Lily oneshot attempt!
10/10
*love*
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{reviewid: 2014538, reviewer: 'Christine'}
22nd December 2008:
I tend to try to stay away from the Lily/James fanfictions, but I really did enjoy this one. It was extremely sweet and romantic. I almost think I'll have to read more Lily/James fanfictions if any of them even remotely compare to this fanfiction. There's wasn't so much detail that I thought I was dying nor was there so little detail that I felt like I was floating in some sort of space vortex. That was a horrible analogy, but that's the only I can describe that your control of detail was fantastic!
Thank you for posting such a great story on this website!
~Christine
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{reviewid: 2012944, reviewer: 'Megan%20and%20Charly%20love%20HP'}
20th December 2008:
I love this story! It's so adorable~ I've read it like three time already! Good job *claps and a cookie* -Charly
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{reviewid: 2007805, reviewer: 'Starved4Romance'}
12th December 2008:
Oh, the challenges of the Visually Deprived.(Put me in that catagory)Ok, so, I'm slow on many things, did James kiss Lily's eye?Like I said, I'm not the sharpest tool in the shed.
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{reviewid: 1996609, reviewer: 'icegreen89'}
27th November 2008:
Loved it- very cool, very james and very lily- like...
what a confusing review (rolls eyes) .. sorry bt that
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{reviewid: 1950716, reviewer: 'adahpfan'}
13th June 2008:
great, very funny!!
10/10
-adahpfan
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{reviewid: 1915926, reviewer: 'Seraphim01'}
6th May 2008:
That was really good Alex. I don't know why but I seemed to laugh half the time! lol oh and Alex, there's this website that I go to where you can translate stuff from english to another language it's dictionary.com Then go under Other Languages, then select Translater: Translate text instantly, and then just translate what you want to know!
Amour,
Rachael
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{reviewid: 1885907, reviewer: 'Niki014'}
5th April 2008:
This is soo realistic of what we have heard of the time of James and Lily, I like the descriptions of everyone and that was really funny, hehe stupid blonde show offs.
You really should write more! :)
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{reviewid: 1874591, reviewer: 'paramore_black'}
24th March 2008:
hehe. this is very funny.
i like it. :D
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{reviewid: 1864110, reviewer: 'Marauderess'}
15th March 2008:
Aw that was really great. Damn you Sirius! you ruined the moment! Loved the fic keep up the fantastic work. Can't wait for the sequal!
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{reviewid: 1855737, reviewer: 'kirstie'}
7th March 2008:
haha its heaps funny. i love it. its one of my fav's now. 10/10
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{reviewid: 1841749, reviewer: 'IS%20bookworm'}
23rd February 2008:
I loved the end! It was pretty much my favorite part! Great one shot! I loved it! Please keep writing stuff! :7)
Author's Response: haha thanks =] i will do!
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{reviewid: 1835262, reviewer: 'Green%20%28not%20logged%20on%29'}
18th February 2008:
I loved it very much. Really really cute story! And very funny :D
Author's Response: Im glad yu liked it ^_^
Thanks!!
-Alex-
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{reviewid: 1835261, reviewer: 'Green%20%28not%20logged%20on%29'}
18th February 2008:
I loved it very much. Really really cute story! And very funny :D
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{reviewid: 1834998, reviewer: 'Nymphadora4Remus4life'}
18th February 2008:
Lol that was so funny i liked it alot!
JJ:P
Author's Response: Im glad =]
Thank yuu
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{reviewid: 1831245, reviewer: 'Smith_Babe_1'}
15th February 2008:
Lol that was hilarious
I wear glasses but not all the time thank god lol should be wearing them now though lol oh well
Hugs
Author's Response: I wear glasses...well, i wear contacts 'cos i should wear them all the time...i had rubbish eyesight ^_^ Thank yuu!
-Alex-
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{reviewid: 1831208, reviewer: 'harry101'}
15th February 2008:
hehehehehehe! that was a cute, james and lily story.
very witty!
Author's Response: LOL! Thank yuu =]
-Alex-
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{reviewid: 1825129, reviewer: 'zEthHPfrEaK'}
9th February 2008:
oooh! I love this story!!! Normally in one-shots people get together, and it seems so fake, but this one it doesn't!!! YAY! Good for you!!!
Author's Response: haha thank youuuu ^_^
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{reviewid: 1782646, reviewer: 'AliceinWonderland'}
7th January 2008:
This is such a cute story! It is also excellent and hilarious.
=D
Author's Response: haha thank youu!!
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