I like it, as soon as this is through ill be putting it as a favourite. Keep on writing, please dont abandon or just stop writing this. I want to see how it will turn out. dont worry about that you lost it, if you could do it once you can do it again :)

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you really need to continue this story, i'm hooked and I don't get hooked on a story unless i think it is really good. i also want to read what happens-so hurry up! :D

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plz write more! u hooked me!!

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I know how you feel. I had a trial version of Microsoft word and when my trial time ran out I lost all my work for my story, so I had to rewrite (by hand) and update as often as I can considering I dont have word (my computer's new, so I have to buy word and put it on it that way).

Anywho, I don't like your style - I LOVE your style! and I LOVE this story. So plz, plz, plz, PLZ! update again soon. I like the way that this story has panned out in the one chapter, and I like the way that it could pan out. If you only rewrite.

I know how frustrating it is to have to rewrite (believe me I do!). I also know how frustrating it is to lose all your work and have to start all over again and then to not have the energy or the stimulation to continue writing.

Anyway, I will be checking every day for when you next update.

luv

Lucy. (Swiftstar)

xox

(P.S. I'm going to do something extremly out of character and give you a 10/10! I don't give 10's. EVER. But your story is just sooo good that I'm going to do it. Just this once.)

(P.P.S. You are an amazing writer!)

Author's Response: hey Lucy,

oh thanks seriously that was one of the best reviews I ever got... but I've long-abandoned that story and started another along similar lines (look for Privacy). oh you got me thinking about the original plot for it's in his eyes... yeah it would've been quite good, it would actually have been better than the one I'm focusing on right now... maybe when I'm done, I'll pick up the first one again. :))

Cheers!

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Oh my gosh I need more! Amazing!

Author's Response: Thanks so much, but i'm abandoning this cuz i was sriting it before hp7 came out and i've lost the plot and the other chapters. i've already started a new novella called "privacy", should b pretty much the same except a lot less dark and scary.

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