I thought this was a really interesting piece on how Sirius and Selene start becoming friends and possibly something more. I felt so bad for James during it though since he tries so hard to get Lily but she just thinks he is conceited. I'm sure that everytime she turns him down it hurts him inside...(i think i just got a new idea for a story). Also your idea about the spattergroit and the name calling thing was really funny and such a great idea! Very original! I thought that this piece was a nice light piece and a good beginning to a couple as well! I bet Sirius was amazed that a girl would tell him that she would puke on him for making her nervous about blushing. I like that that is what kinda gets his attention to her and that he wonders how he didn't really notice her before. Great Job.
~Slytherin~ Report Review
Oh! Tahi! I was worried. I thought you changed author names! But you haven't. Phew!
Well, hi Mandy!
I'm Ali (Anjali), and Tahi asked me to review this. So, here I am. :)
Okay. First off. A cute fluffy one-shot. :)
I love fluff. It's so...cute!
It's a little short...but then again, I'm being quite hypocritic. My stuff is ALWAYS short.
Selene seems...different? But I think I like her. I don't really know her yet.
Anyway. I like this. Very cute.
You didn't ask for all compliments though...so CC.
Sometimes you had a few words which didn't really...fit.
and acting as though he would be ill behind James' back.
Maybe you could have said sick, instead of ill. It just fits better.
But with that said. I like it. A lot. Oh! And Mary-sue made me laugh. A person ACTUALLY called Mary-Sue. Priceless.
Er. I'm sorry this is terribly short...but...yeah. I'm tired. :D
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Yay! *bounce bounce* Anyhow, I knew this was there, just managed to forget about it. Yay! Sirius and Selene is such a fun thing. Havn't decided if I like Sirius/Selene (Creperum) or Sirius/Selene (AIS) I guess they are sorta the same, but not really. Hey whatever though. This was a lot of fun to read, I just really like these two together, no matter where!
Yay, *fan-girl moment* Report Review
Is there going to be more following this?Author's Response: Oh yes, much more. Much, much more. I actually just submitted the next bit so look forward to it in about...*checks queue*...a week-ish. You'll love it as much as this one! Thanks for the review! Report Review
Something I don't get - I went to your author's page and looked at your stories and there was only one ie. this one. What's up with that? I thought you said there were more?
Please, do write more, and quickly, as I NEED you to. So, yeah, bye! You're a berryberryvery good author!!!Author's Response: The other stories are works in progress, because we pass them back and forth and also have our own individual stories to work on. There will be more, plenty more. I'll have to see what Tahi has going through her mind. Thank you, thank you, for the review and liking it! Report Review
I love you guys.
You always make me laugh.
This reminds me of the good old days, our role-play you know.
-itchitchitch- Must have one. Now.
You two never cease to amaze me, you know that.
GinniAuthor's Response: Gin!!*HUGGLEGLOMPATTACK* My Gin...We lurv you too!! It is our job to make you laugh, is it not? You made us laugh several times as well. Tahi started it and we get ideas from the good old site. How we miss thee, DM!
Our insanity never ceases to amaze anyone ^_^
Luv ya bunches!
FLEA!! *crash tackles* As Mandy said, it's our job to make you laugh. We kinda missed DM very much and decided to make it proud of us. Hehe. Keep checking, though. We'll have new surprises up anytime now.
Missing you loads,
Tahi or Miss Burpy, as you prefer :P Report Review
pretty sweet.Author's Response: Oooh, thanks :) Report Review
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