Hey!
That was really good!
I decided to read your story because you so lovingly read an reviewed mine and this was quite good!
OH yeah, if you'd like a banner, i can help you get one! Email me at indirapotter@hotmail.com if you do!
Good luck with the story!
xx
Indira

Author's Response: hey thx 4 reviewin indira! its soooo great of u! and thx, i will email u!!!
~JL1313

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awww that's sad!!! poor james! please update soon!

Author's Response: i no, but evntually it gets better 4 the poor kid! thx again
~JL1313

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It's good except that you might want to use spellcheck on the chapters before submitting them. Also, I'm not quite sure what you meant by saying that Lily was tall but not completely flat. That confused me. Maybe I'm just trying to read too much into it. lol

Author's Response: LOL it just means shes startin 2 get curves. i need 2 wrk w my spellin but i hav started using Micro. word 4 it!
~JL1313

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Luv it. added to favs!! 100/10

Author's Response: omg thx!!! ur the first 2 add me 2 faves!!!! THK U SSSSSSOOOOO MUCH!!! u realy dont no how much this means. its like getting an online oscar... wow... im off my rocker like dumbledore but hes pimpin kewl so woohoo!

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i recently read your first a chapter a week ago and was hopeing you would write a nother chapter. And this chapter is great please write more and its a great place to stop. I wonder what you will write next please write soon.

Author's Response: i will and thx 4 reviewin!


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Nice job! I think it's a good start and I'm looking forwards to more! 9/10
~JLH~

Author's Response: thx lots IM A JAMESLILYHARRY CRAZED FAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hahaha hehehe heeheehee

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hola me please remember 2 edit this stry when ur eithr a trusted author or July 27 comes round cuz its really messed up NEway... thx 4 da stry

Author's Response: dun thx me!!!!!

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