watch out for typos! hurry with the next chappy! Report Review
Interesting idea and please update soon thanks Report Review
The story's okay. I would have made the first chapter longer and added a bit more about the seven deadly sins. Also I would have included a little more action in it. Get the reader hooked more than you did... Report Review
OMG love it.ok well if u want to send me it...i can edit it for u. BUT I ABSOLUTLY LOVE iT!Author's Response: i no :) Report Review
hi! ur story has a FANTASTIC start! its sooo interesting! i love it! keep up the great work!! and please update soon! MiriamAuthor's Response: thank you so much this story took a lot of planning and you wiill understand why soon thank you for ur review Report Review
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