{reviewid: 2116146, reviewer: 'erised713'}
12th May 2009:
Well, if you're going to be violent about it - fine! I will review! Ha haha! It's interesting you had Lily survive the same way I had her survive in my story "Raising A Hero". Voldemort disarmed James through the window, right? Also, I hadn't pegged Voldemort as the type of guy to disarm when he could kill - or at the very least, stun! Anyway, I've submitted chapter 4 of my story (the sequel to the one I mentioned above). Maybe you could check it out when it is validated.
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{reviewid: 1896211, reviewer: 'Ink_Well'}
15th April 2008:
i liked it...i was a bit short and im sure the following chapters will have more depth to them so it was a great start (and intresting idea too! 10/10!
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{reviewid: 1867777, reviewer: 'DR_CHICK909'}
18th March 2008:
hey man hurry up and write more of the story!!!
i need to read more!!
its really good so far!
cant wait till next chapter!
10/10
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{reviewid: 1766345, reviewer: 'Saphira'}
26th December 2007:
A brilliant story. Keep working on it will you? I am eager to read another chapter so hurry up! Please!
Author's Response: im thinking of revising it right now. i'll change it a bit so it can follow the story line that popped into my head. please be patient with me.
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{reviewid: 1750375, reviewer: 'x%20Michelle%20x'}
12th December 2007:
hay would you please please make more chapters.^_^
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{reviewid: 1744424, reviewer: 'harrychick'}
8th December 2007:
please come out with the next ch. i cant wait for it.
XD
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{reviewid: 1735563, reviewer: 'James%20and%20sirius%204%20eva'}
1st December 2007:
Hey, goos job it looks like its going to be a good story.
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{reviewid: 1669157, reviewer: 'maurdersdaughter'}
14th October 2007:
i'm intregued(sp?) but this story copuld use a few more chapters.or a lot more chapters...i'm not the author, i can't tell. hah! you can though! update soon pleazz!!!
10/10!!! great!
Author's Response: yeah. i know it needs chapters but i might abandone it. i have NO time to work on it anymore. im thinking about letting someone take over for me...
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{reviewid: 1637770, reviewer: 'mal_ber_0303'}
20th September 2007:
loved it write more soon check out my first f- fiction called "what happened" its sad :( with a happy twist :)
Author's Response: thank you! ill try...i started this a long time ago and i lost my whole plot. ill try to update though
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{reviewid: 1575279, reviewer: 'mrsmolly'}
14th August 2007:
good story so far, but sense is spelled s-e-n-s-e, not 'since' which is past tense. please update
Author's Response: thanx! ill try to fix that. thank you for revewing. you wont die!!!!!
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{reviewid: 1561363, reviewer: 'Qwerty1127'}
8th August 2007:
Luv it cant wait for next chappie!
Author's Response: Thanks! im working on it. i recently changed my whole plot so it may be a while!
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{reviewid: 1526092, reviewer: 'David%20Fishwick'}
20th July 2007:
Interesting storyline please write more and good work on the story so far. One question is Voldemort really gone or not? please update thanks.
Author's Response: voldemort is gone until fourth year just like in the books...thanx for the review
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{reviewid: 1514616, reviewer: 'Ginny_is_BEAST'}
14th July 2007:
yay! i get the first review! this is really good and i can't wait for an update! keep writing! 10, 000, 000, 000/10
Author's Response: wow i didnt think this story would hit it off. yay you.first review...*hands you cookie* ill get the next chapter up soon
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