aww what a sweet ending, can't wait to read what happens next.

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oh wow, i wonder where her mother might have gone, can't wait to read what happens next.

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SOB is Sirius Orion Black, can't wait to read what happens next.

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Hey great story up to now by the way :D

Answer to questions:

Who do i think S.O.B is? - Sirius Orinion Black

I hope i'm right cause i think im right,. cause it is just like the books when Sirius's brother Regulas has the intials R.A.B printed on the bottom of the note in the fake locket.

Very cool idea by the way :D

-Lallen :)

10/10

Author's Response: Correct :D

& thank you for the review/comment ^__^ ♥

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what about Ron and Hermione? And i don't think James would be such an arse. If she was a slytherin, i could believe it, but hufflepuffs are never their focus when being prats. Anyway 9/10. This chapter really explained my question.

Author's Response: lol, why thank you. ^__^ As for the stuff that's been going on, I'm planning on making a come back to HPFF, because I have quite a lot to edit! xD

Thank you for your review anyhow :) *huggles* Fair thee well, reviewer.

~Meli

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i want to read more!! it really makes you wonder what my husband(SHHH! I LIKE TO PRETEND!! LOL) James, Remus, and Peter DID!! How does she not know about lily?? Aghh this story has so many unanswered questions!!
10/10

Author's Response: Lol, whoa XD I just come back and this is what I find =) Nice. Anywho... don't worry. Sirius has been um... up and about (lmao!). And it's okay xD I like to pretend too. Anywho... I need to really edit everything up xD

Hope you have a great read-through, though :D

Hugs, and all that jazz,
Meli♥

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i like your story,
but the fact that she dosen't know who harry potter is a bit wierd.I mean if she is a witch than obviously she is supposed to know about the famous harry potter.right?

Author's Response: Sorry for the late response. I'm actually in college now and I haven't written much ;) (But I'm actually editing around, so don't mind this much)

The reason that it's weird is that she's been all over the place (you'll learn more about that as you read along into the sequel that I have up). She comes back not knowing that Lily and James even tied the knot. (Well...she kinda did know about Harry, but that's a bit afterwards, I think O.o)

But yeah, I'm going to edit and this chapter's going to be different by then. There'll be a load of differences in the versions that you're seeing now. (And to believe that I wrote this over a year ago xD)

Thank you for your comment, though :) It's very appreciated (and you pointed that out very well, indeed ^^).

Thanks once more,
Meli :]

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Is 'sob' Sirius Orion Black by any chance
i love this story and your a fantastic author =]

cheers ~Kellie~

Author's Response: *nods* Yes, you are quite a witty reader. :]

Why thank you for your compliment. *bows* ;D I shall keep writing.

Your [oddball] of a writer,
~Meli♥

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i love this story but when does Severus come in more then a memory?

Author's Response: Later, dear reader, later. :)

(I'm glad that you're taking interest into this fic - hopefully some more people do the same. :])

Your tired escritora,
~Meli♥

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wow, i really like this story. Its the first one that ive acctually read on this site.

Author's Response: :] I'm glad that you are liking this fic. :) Please continue to read, WrathOfSlytherin!

Your crazy writer,
~Meli♥

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Brilliant story, I love happy endings1 And thanks for the quote, by the way! it's nice to know someone likes my writing enough to quote it. Can't wait for the sequel. Mine should be finished in two chapters, and then I'm probably gonna post a one-shot with Maverick, Sev's dog and then the Sequel to TVBT--Arista Snape and the Bronze Dragons. My song for the wedding is an old one, 1980's, called Always and Forever by Heat Wave. It's a love song and my sister danced to it at her wedding and is one of my favorites. One last question though, will Harry marry Sisi and give Sev and Margo grandkids? Could you see Sev as a grandpa? LOL!

Author's Response: Probably... you never know... (lol indeed!)

Thank you for being here to review. :D I feel ultra special! (Well, let's just say that the sequel has two chapters so far and I'm waiting on the banner to be made so that I can post it up!)

Thanks once again. Oh, tell me when your stuff updates! (I kinda get surprised when I notice I'm many chapters behind....)

Your writer and Escritora,
~Meli

P/s: So far the chapters are: (1) "Visiting Familiars" and (2) "Meeting Lalage Patterson". *hehe* For right now I think I'm going to let people guess what those chapters are about...

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Yay, I'm so happy for them. And I'd really like to see Sev's diary, that would be really cool. As for the others, I really liked Ginger's diary because I could really relate to her. I was kind of an outcast too in high school, i had one best friend and we did everything together and we still see each other and talk and send gifts every holiday.

Author's Response: :D Yay! Well, we're going to see Sev's version of a diary (hello -- a pensive!) and Ginger's will be reviewed by our one and only...

Sirius!

While Ginger finally gets to read his diary because Cicily has given it to her!

Your writer,
~Meli
P/s: I'm sooooo full of spoilers today...

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yay I like your ending better, because Sev is alive of course and he's with Margo. I think Harry needs to think very carefully about who he loves. I never minded him with Ginny but I also really like Cicily and it would be a neat twist for them to be together and then, if all goes well with Margo and Sev, Sev would kind of be Harry's dad, or father-in-law.

Author's Response: Haha... that's what I was aiming for. :D *hehe!*

Thank you for your review, Snapegirl. :] It's very nice to see some reviews to end up this fic... with a nice ending.

Your writer,
~Meli

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Awww it's over! I would have used Edwin McCain's "I'll be" just because it's a pretty song and it's one of my favorites. I can't wait for the sequel!

Author's Response: The sequel might be up in December, just so you know. Thanks for coming by yet again, asian! I'm surprised that someone still comes by to review. :D

I like that song too! Wait for the sequel, it'll be out and it will repeat most of the facts from this fic in it (I'll try to get some more readers to get onto it. :D).

Thank you for reviewing and thanks for being the first person to review from chapter 8 on down to this one. (I don't really know when you started, but I'm glad that you kept going.)

Your writer & Escritora (whom is working homework over the line - lol!),
~Meli♥

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Aw Cicily and Harry are sooo cute! I don't really have a favorite diary. I liked them all because they each told a different story or in some cases different parts of a story.

Author's Response: :D Thanks for coming over to review!

=) I'm so glad that you still come over. (The last chapter will be up soon, I promise!)

Your (odd, busy, and flunking-psychology)writer,
~Meli

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Awesomeness! I've always liked the ending. It's cool.

You had a few spelling mistakes. Like at the beginning, you used fowl. A fowl is a bird. Foul would have been more appropriate. The english language is so complicated.

Personally, I think that Harry should end up with Ginny just because I think they're perfect for each other. But this is your story and you can do what you want with it.

Author's Response: Thanks, asian! I fixed up the "fowl".

I shall update today once I get back from my Art class. *I'm working on a few projects = a ceiling tile and a canvas.

Your writer (that is awfully busy today),
~Meli

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Even though you said that you weren't going kill Serverus off, for a second there I though he was going to die. lol I have no faith in you.

I'm glad you got James and Serverus to come to a truce too. Wouldn't that be weird if somehow they became friends? lol Yeah probably in some parallel universe. lol

Author's Response: AH! No way! Severus hasn't really gotten to the friend-to-friend stage. I don't think that it would ever happen. (Then again, yeah, probably in some parallel universe... I have the feeling that you've read the book called "A Crack in the Line" -- if you haven't then you must read it!).

Let's hope that I get the next chapter by next week (I've been really busy as of lately... I mean everyone gets Monday off and I have to go to school to finish my 2 Studio pieces for my IB Art class...).

I'm still happy that some reviews are coming in (exclusively from my faithful reviewers!)!

~Meli

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Ah the horrors of war. People dying left and right. You would think that after a while people would quit killing each other off and risking their own lives. Tis a shame. People can be such idiots.

Good chapter! I'm still sad that Fred had to die.

Author's Response: I didn't know if I should have left him or not. Still, you're very right about the horrors of war (I chuckled at the last part, but then again, you're very right). I'm still trying to plan out the "Flaw in the Plan" it will probably be very... wierd...

Thanks for still coming around to review!

~Meli

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Yay Severus lives! Thank you thank you1 And please let him marry Margo, he deserves a chance to be happy. Let him fight somebody too, maybe Rosier or Malfoy, I think he deserves a chance to kick some Death Eater butt.

Author's Response: I can do that for you, but it's going to require some work. (Malfoy's not really into it since his son's in danger in some way -- Narcissa might turn up later)

However, yes, he does need to kick some Death Eater but! (I don't know if Cicily will take it well that her Mother is with Severus, but all will go well after a while. :])

I'm glad that you're happy! (All reviewers need that once in a moment... in reading a very long fic...)

~Meli

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Excellent chapter, i really liked the talk with Cael and the battle, except for the part where poor Fred dies--again!

Author's Response: Still... it happens. :) Thanks for coming around to review (it really does mean a lot to me!).

~Meli

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Author's Response: Awesome. :) I'm glad to see that at least someone is reviewing. ;)

Yo' writer,
~Meli

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Hopefully the Carrows. And I love the fact that Margo can make potions too. Please let her get back with Sev, PLEASE. By the way, my new chapter is up and you can read it. It's Arista's first year at Hogwarts.

Author's Response: Awesome! I've read it and revied already, by the way. :) Make sure to update soon!

Anywho... Margo will probably get back with Severus... (I'm trying to change his fate in the meanwhile -- Yikes! I'm in planning!)

Alrighty, I'll update [soon].

Yo' writer,
~Meli

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How sad, but why would Eileen, who married a Muggle, be so very prejudiced against them? And perhaps Severus remembered margo?

Author's Response: Er... why would Severus always say "That Mudblood!" most of the time? I asked myself that when I was writing.

About Eileen... I made her husband out to be abusive and very heartless. So, yeah... she'd think less of Muggles (us) and such.

~Meli♥

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Good for you, because people like us have been protecting ourselves for years without magic. I mean, wizards are powerful true, but they can still die if you shoot them with a gun or hit them over the head with a cast iron skillet (my personal favorite) right? And I'm glad Cicily admitted she likes Harry. Who will he choose?

Author's Response: A cast iron skillet, you say? I need to look that up (I have a mental image, however, it isn't up to date since I totaly forgot what a skillet was...).

I have no idea who he will choose... I'll just wait until he tells me who... (I'm waiting on inspiration to help me here...)

Your (busy-with-homework) writer,
~Meli♥

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You answered a lot of questions here, which was good. it just goes to show you how fickle people can be, especially when it comes to appearances. As for Margo, did she perhaps go to Severus for help?

Author's Response: Margo??? No... apparently she didn't. (I can say it now because I already submitted the chapter. *teehee* Good for me!)

Your writer,
~Meli

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