{reviewid: 1976804, reviewer: 'Katastrophe'}
29th October 2008:
your story is great! don't stop writing!!!
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{reviewid: 1743268, reviewer: 'danik_1230'}
7th December 2007:
u that was very short
Author's Response: yeah i know it was a bit of an inbetween chapter im really sorry but the next one will be up very soon.
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{reviewid: 1741098, reviewer: 'Padfoot_is_mine'}
5th December 2007:
Oo sounds interesting! Update soon!
Author's Response: Will do thanks muchos! x
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{reviewid: 1724360, reviewer: 'Lahiru'}
24th November 2007:
Very good camparede to other stories i've read. no draging romance. and thae fact that you selected the pre- Harry-potter-era. is clever. cuz there would be more vampires.it would be better is you don't name loard voldemort as tom riddle cuz he wanted to hide his name as much as possible. but the fact that voldemort used an anciant vampire house or castle in rumania as his base is damn cool. and the girls neckless is a nice touch. most stories lack the magic or only use the magic made by JKR. that's what make them quite boring. people should remember that the foundation to the harry potter theme is this whole magic concept.. but if you can come up with new ideas. and if you can bind youre stories to the 7 books in some places that'll be a classic. good job. and make yourself a nice banner... you started a nice theme.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! yeah your right about the tom riddle thing i forgot that was something Dumbledore knew perhaps exlusively. Yeah i really liked the necklace idea... i want one and i agree more magic should be used because that is the fundamentla idea and what makes the world so cgreat (not this world but you get me...)
Keep reading and reviewing. x
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{reviewid: 1686749, reviewer: 'danik_1230'}
27th October 2007:
GOLLY GIRL WHEN R U GOIN TO MAKE A 7TH CHAPTER
Author's Response: aaahhhh im so sorry! ive been overloaded with uni stuff and got a job which overoverloaded everything... i know its no excuse.but the next chap is up for validation and ive written the rest so itll take as long as the validators for the story to be done. yayayayay. thanks for reviewing i love any review - even if its just telling me to get my arse in gear.
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{reviewid: 1684128, reviewer: 'danik_1230'}
25th October 2007:
U R TAKING FOREVER TO UPDATE
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{reviewid: 1648410, reviewer: 'DanDash'}
29th September 2007:
oh! Sirius is so caring (I didn't know he had it in him...well, not until he's 30)
Auralia is like...arg...she's acting like...so like... weak!!!
she lets everyone take control over her!!! WTH???
=]
Author's Response: ha ha i always though sirius had a caring side... look how he acts to Harry? but also guys generally act like hat to girls they like whether they mean it or not. Auralia is weak, i dislike her actuallly.... dont know why i still have her!
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{reviewid: 1635599, reviewer: 'DanDash'}
18th September 2007:
That Hammish dude is such a retard! She should have showed him her fangs or something and say somthing like, "oh, but I know they're real" (vampires) ...
=]
Author's Response: ha ha i know he is a retard, that is actually a really good idea! i wish she did that instead of just leaving it be! thanks for the review! x
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{reviewid: 1635138, reviewer: 'danik_1230'}
18th September 2007:
GREAT i liked it alot u r a good writer.:)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for saying that! keep reading. x
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{reviewid: 1634534, reviewer: 'Wand%20Maker%20Extraordinaire'}
17th September 2007:
This is a really great story so far!! I absolutely love it!! update soon please!
Author's Response: thank you will update soon! xxx
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{reviewid: 1622181, reviewer: 'DanDash'}
9th September 2007:
oh! 'Padfood' so sensitive about his name!
nice chapter!
=]
Author's Response: i know i love the padfoot thingie... Thnaks for reviewing! xxx
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{reviewid: 1611278, reviewer: 'Book077'}
3rd September 2007:
great chapter
Author's Response: yay thanks soo mch for reading it all!
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{reviewid: 1611261, reviewer: 'Book077'}
3rd September 2007:
good chapie
Author's Response: Ta
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{reviewid: 1611213, reviewer: 'Book077'}
3rd September 2007:
good
Author's Response: thanks!
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{reviewid: 1604701, reviewer: 'Jacob'}
30th August 2007:
Hey long chapter but i really liked it! hope it stays that way hey? ;)
Author's Response: Thanks Jacob x
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{reviewid: 1604698, reviewer: 'Blacklover'}
30th August 2007:
AAAHHH (Weeping loudly) Auralia cant leave it like that it is so fustrating! update!! x
Author's Response: Ha dont worry it will get better! thanks x
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{reviewid: 1604695, reviewer: 'Vamos'}
30th August 2007:
!!! Really nice moment they had there... i am guessing something more happens with the two of them though?
i loved the unicorn - beautiful discriptions again. x
Author's Response: Thank you sooo much x
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{reviewid: 1604692, reviewer: 'Vamos'}
30th August 2007:
Wow really long chapter! it was a bit confusing in terms of lay out though...
But still you have a beautiful writing style and i really enjoyed your discriptions although i really had to sit down and take my time! Really good chapter. x
Author's Response: Yeah you are right about it being a bit higgility piggility i was in a huge rush and just wanted it to be up because my laptop kept on making things dissapear (not that im trying to exuse myself!) x
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{reviewid: 1604689, reviewer: 'Vamos'}
30th August 2007:
looks really good, it has potential and really can't wait for the rest of the story. Vampires is really interesting and different but please dont make it another pure-blood hottie vs Sirius love hate relationship thing though???
Author's Response: Thank you vamos, its not going to go intirely in that direction.... i know what you mean there are alot of those stories around. x
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{reviewid: 1604690, reviewer: 'Vamos'}
30th August 2007:
looks really good, it has potential and really can't wait for the rest of the story. Vampires is really interesting and different but please dont make it another pure-blood hottie vs Sirius love hate relationship thing though???
Author's Response: Yeah i know what you mean about those story lines being a bit unoriginal and over used but just wait and see how this story is going... because this is only the begining.
Thanks for reviewing Vamos! xxx
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{reviewid: 1602463, reviewer: 'DanDash'}
28th August 2007:
not fair!!! her invisibility cloak in fake!!!
its really cool that she can turn to a lepord!!!
=]
Author's Response: ha ha yeah i always wanted to turn into a leopard so there you go.
ha ha about the cloak its just because i wrote this ages ago before DH so i never knew about the hallows. But in the book it mentioned there where other invisibility cloaks they just didnt last as long... thanks for reviewing xxx
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{reviewid: 1556542, reviewer: 'Kaelin'}
6th August 2007:
I like:) I like a lot!!! Yay! (wow, a long chapter, hey? it just made me love it more) :)
Author's Response: Thanks xxx
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{reviewid: 1556540, reviewer: 'Kaelin'}
6th August 2007:
A truly commendable story! I like it :) Original. I don't know if I just missed it, but vampires were one major *creature* that Rowling, i think, almost never, if ever mentioned in harry potter (just imagine if she had, the cool things that could have taken place, *sigh*).
Author's Response: ha ha ye i always loved vampires and just thought what the hey im going to write about one.The only time she ever references to a vampire is in HBP when slughorns friend who wrote a book on vampires brought ne with him. thanks for the review. x
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{reviewid: 1515150, reviewer: 'serafina'}
15th July 2007:
please please review
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