I love the changed Draco and even though it is imposible I like the story. Something light and lovely like this was just what I needed.Author's Response: Well, anything on here, practically, is impossible... ya know? I am having major writer's block, and I haven't updated anything in forever... I hope to fix that soon! Thanks for the support! Rebecka M. Report Review
Hmm. Quite a lot of kissing there! LOL. There was this one scene here that I really liked, which was when they argued about why they slept well. Haha. Since I think you planned this on being longer than a one-shot or a short story, I think it would help plotwise to devote time for descriptions. It will improve your characterisation as well as the general mood/flow of the story. :)Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! It was fun but sorta hard to write the scene of why they slept well. I will describe them more in the second chapter, and then hopefully it will help the story flow! I really appreciate your advice! I look forward to you updating your H/JP story! Rebecka M. Report Review
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