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Review #1, by Lily__Potter New Trend

18th October 2009:
Hey fawkes. Love this story! I'm really interested to find out who the father is though. At first, I thought she may have been raped, but Im not positive now. I really like how Danny acted torwards it, it kind of spiced up the story. But I don't want this to trun out to be a cliche story, so that when (and if) Sirius and Hayden start dating, Danny gets mad and tells the whole school her secret! I would hate that! Hopefully, it will turn out better, and im sure that having you as an anuthor will make it better. hope to see a chapter soon!
;)
xx Lils

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Review #2, by FlufferNutter New Trend

16th January 2009:
Great chapter. Loved it. alot. want more please!!

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Review #3, by lala25525 Teacher Mail

29th November 2008:
i dont get it... whos the dad? and when did IT happen?/

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Review #4, by Dancer4God007 Merlin's Knickers

12th May 2008:
I love your story
update soon please
It is amazing!!! :)

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Review #5, by numba1marauderluva Merlin's Knickers

10th May 2008:
Your really killing me, you know that?

I really REALLY need to know who the father is. Of course, suspense is good only if your the AUTHOR =D Ah well, I THINK I'll live :P

Okay, I like the way you dont make Danny just the supportive, loyal friend, blah blah blah, like a cliche. He actually has a temper and goes off big time, and I like that. Adds some drama. I dont know why, but I was laughing throughout the whole chapter.

Don't ask me why. I think I'm pre-pre demented =) I like her situation, and - OH MY GOD I THINK I KNOW WHAT MIGHT'VE HAPPENED - sorry. I'll calm myself now x)

One request: Don't make it obvious, which I think will kind of be impossible. Great story, and next time, update faster, please (:

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Review #6, by magical words Merlin's Knickers

7th May 2008:
Ah! Who's the father? I want to know so badly. Is it any of the Marauders, or is it one of her friends, like Isaac? (For some reason, I keep thinking Isaac or Sirius.)

Well, update soon so I can find out!

By the way, I am really enjoying this!

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Review #7, by michaelaxleigh Merlin's Knickers

7th May 2008:
im pretty suree im
in lovee with your storyy(:
i jus startedd readinn it
and cant wait for more hopefully
when the other boys find out it
goess a little bitt smootherr.
andd we still have the mysteryy of
who the dadd iss. i lovee the storyy and
imm gladd you didnt makee her pregnant
the first chapta and that there is
the mystery of the daddy. imm guessing
the kidss are goin to be twinss but nott sure.
hah sorry if this review is randemmm./

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Review #8, by Ryaine Merlin's Knickers

7th May 2008:
I have to say "WOW" I am amazed by your story, I love it, I can't wait to see how it all works out in the end, great plot too... :)

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Review #9, by Dreamchaser Merlin's Knickers

7th May 2008:
No no no no no the chappy can't be over yet :O give a few minutes to prosess this :O

Okay I'm here again, I absolutely love this story, Anxious to know who's the father and all. DO continue soon!!!

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Review #10, by Ashburg7 Nothing will harm you

7th May 2008:
I give an 8 because I love Sirius Black but this chapter just makes me hate him and James. No girl should ever tolerate being treated like that! Otherwise, the writing is well done!

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Review #11, by crazybibliophile Merlin's Knickers

7th May 2008:
I'm completely in love with this story... although I feel so sorry for your characters, I mean poor Hayden! And I have to say, Danny's a bit unfair on her... didn't take it very well, did he? And I'm glad the Marauders have started to show signs of maturity. I love James and Sirius, they're adorable...

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Review #12, by samitaclover Teacher Mail

17th April 2008:
that was a great chapter. but who is the father of her baby???

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Review #13, by Katie Black Teacher Mail

25th March 2008:
WHO IS THE FATHER! UG! I don't know and it's driving me crazy! please, hurry w/ the next chapter!

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Review #14, by Katie Black How to woo a girl

25th March 2008:
very nice. don't know what else to say. quite good. i like the crups. very cute. keep going!

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Review #15, by Katie Black Social Suicide

25th March 2008:
very nice, yet again! although i have to admit i hate cliffhangers! but that's okay, it's still a awsome story!

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Review #16, by Katie Black Nothing will harm you

25th March 2008:
love it! i really like hayden. very interesting name, ive never heard of it and would never of thought of it-but i really love that name! nice story! putting it as one of my fav.'s! keep writing! :)

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Review #17, by Loony lovegood Teacher Mail

8th March 2008:
This is so frigging good!! please carry on and son!

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Review #18, by sugarroxs Teacher Mail

8th March 2008:
Omg the tension... Who's the Daddy? Why Sirius?
And more importantly will she ever get a Crup?
These questions are gonna be bothering me Alll through March Beak ... thx :P LOL PLZ UPDATE SOON

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Review #19, by marieluz Teacher Mail

6th March 2008:
this is getting better by the chapter!

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Review #20, by tashhh Teacher Mail

5th March 2008:
whos the fatherrr?

im quite curious about that fact aye.

well cant wait to read some more.

10/10

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Review #21, by music_isMy_Life Teacher Mail

5th March 2008:
ohhh sirius knows! LOL been waiting ages 4 this thx 4 updating!

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Review #22, by crazybibliophile Teacher Mail

5th March 2008:
I love this, it is so SO cool!! Update please!!!

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Review #23, by marieluz Ravenclaw Power

2nd March 2008:
i was right! yay! i wonder who the father is though! please update soon!!!

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Review #24, by marieluz How to woo a girl

2nd March 2008:
i think i have an idea to why Hayden's been sick..
Great chapter!!.

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Review #25, by marieluz Social Suicide

2nd March 2008:
i dont really understand what was wrong with her in the first place...
great chapter, though!!

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