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Review #1, by wanna_b_urs The Last Visit to the Dursleys

12th July 2007:
Hey bro! You're off to a good start. Try to be a little more descriptive, and try not to rush through the chapters though. It tends to make the reader's a little bit confused...it's just something I've noticed from other fan fic writers.
Peace.Love.Chicken Grease.

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