Wow.

Your stories are so dark and beautiful. I never knew that unhappy Draco/Hermione pairings could be so amazing.

Well, I'd like to say that the fact that Pansy's threats were still haunting him whenever he spoke to Hermione was quite confusing at first, but it really added to the effect of the story. It gave this haunted feeling, that he could never tell the truth to her anymore. And the fact that he even cheated on Hermione with Pansy makes that feeling even worse...

The chest of pictures and notes was very sentimental too. It's very significant that Draco kept all of Hermione's but Pansy destroyed all of his. And when Pansy wreaked havoc on the ones he kept, it was so...frightening, I guess.

And when Draco murdered her in the bathtub...goodness. I think she planned for him to do that, the way she didn't struggle but just gave in. Like she knew that if she died, Hermione would find out and it would ruin the relationship. And it did. The idea that Draco never really loved Hermione kills me (heheh shippers, all the way) but it's really breathtaking, the way you wrote it.

Last of all...THE ENDING. Holy...honestly, I don't even know what to say. The water on his arm... O.O It's so surreal, and maybe his imagination, but it definitely portrays how conflicted he is, how much he can't forget Pansy even though he wants to...

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I really have no words to say how amazing this is. Really. I can't believe I hadn't read this sooner, but now that I did I'm completely in love with it. I love the way it's so dark and twisted, the entire idea is brilliant and the way you wrote it... I repeat, no words. You've just made my day for the couple, um, next days, weeks, months... Love it! 10/10.

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wow...thisis really great.i...just...wow

this is just to much to put into words about how this is amazing

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that is so creepy. after i submit this, i'm checking up the meaning for paramour. where do you get your ideas? they're so amazing, and original, and realistic, and you write out your stories so well. i could actually see it all playing out in front of me, if you get what i mean.
keep writing!
jay

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Wow! That was very abstract wasn't it?!

Author's Response: ^_^ I hope that means you enjoyed it!

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Brilliance =) I loved the use of the song too.

Author's Response: Thank you so much Space Dementia!

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Dark, morbid, a bit twisted, I LOVED it.

Author's Response: Thanks Devon!

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wow- i thought that this story was really creative i liked it
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Author's Response: Thank you very much Bec ^_^

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Fantastically written. I was slightly confused at first but then, like all well written stories, it all fell into place. Excellent!

Author's Response: Thank you very much Winter!!

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I like the fic! It was written very well but I didn't understand it...

Author's Response: I'm sorry it confused you but I am pleased you enjoyed it anyways! You can always track me down via my site, the TFO site, or the HPFF forums to ask me any questions ^_^

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wow...that was intense... so intricate and kind of difficult to keep up with-but Amazing! 11/10!

Author's Response: Thank you so much Hannah!

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interesting play on reality vs. what happens in one's mind. i liked it alot, the parallelism between hermione and pansy was really good. It was very e.a. poe. i liked it. : )

Author's Response: Ha thank you!! How wonderful ^_^

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Oh my god this is great. I printed it out during study hall and read it during science. it was great!

Author's Response: Ha ha you should be doing classwork in class missy! ^_- I am glad you enjoyed it

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HA HA THATS NUTTS!!! LOL I love it! It reminds me sooo much of the Music Video! She he sounds like such a total nutt! GO HERMIONE YOU LEAVE HIM! Poor Pansy. I actually feel kinda bad for her!

Lizzy

Author's Response: I am glad you enjoed it ^_^

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OMG! I really like it! I think that if you could write a sequel that would be interesting! Anyway, good luck, good job, and keep writing! :)

Author's Response: Thanks hun ^_-

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wait is hermione engaged to ginny or something what?

Author's Response: Engaged to Ginny? No ^_^ The triangle is from Pansy to Draco and Hermione to Draco ^_^

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BEAUTIFUL!!! ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL!

Author's Response: Thank you so much ^_^

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that was deep... creepy... and very good... keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you ^_^

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Whoah this was creepy, but cool. To have Pansy saying the equally spooky song lyrics. Did Draco ever love Hermione in this context?

Author's Response: You could interpret him as loving her, yes. It actually works both ways. I think when I wrote it he did in my mind.

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WOW!Great chapter!I love the way you put the song in the story like you did,and I love that song,O and the way they both said it was over"Funny".

Author's Response: Thanks my dear ^_^

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OMG that was so creepy. I absolutely loved it. It was really cool how you worked the song lyrics in there. They went really well with your story.

Author's Response: Heh heh this is probably the creepiest of my stories (except for the dreams in Arabesque). I am very fond of it heh heh

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WOW was this good. Definitely one of the favourites, ever. Incredible. I don't really know how to express how much I like this, lol, so I'll just give you a pat on the back. =)

Author's Response: Aw wow thank you very much!

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That was awesome! A bit creepy, but awesome all the same. I loved it.
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Author's Response: Thank you ^_^

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Great job. I heard the song in my head when I read it. A throphy wife, oh, how cute. That really fitted with this story. And then he killed her. Marvellous. Just wondering why he didn't kill Mione, after all, she was turning him. He just let her go without a ( real ) struggle. Hmm..

Author's Response: He had no strength left after Pansy's hauntings ^_- Thanks for the review hun ^_^

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Great story! I loved it!! Please continue to keep writing good stories!! =]]
*hands plate of cookies*

Author's Response: *accepts cookies* Deal!

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