Wow, this is pretty much amazing! I was on the leaky lounge and I came along your link for your fanfiction site. As I said, this is amazing! If you write anything else, please message me on the forum. My username is ***LoonyLover***.
Great job!!Author's Response: Thank you for your lovely review Kim, I'll look out for you on LL - Did you see that I had posted a re-worked version of this story that fits with cannon? Its called 'The First of September' Please take a look if you can and tell me which one you prefer! :D Firestarburst Report Review
great story, loved the ending Report Review
It's really good for your first fanfic! 9/10Author's Response: *blushing* Report Review
hehe! nice little one shot! you wrote it very well! i liked how everyone treated harry ron and hermione, and how harry is head boy, and his reaction to malfoy! haha! good writing! :)
rose :DAuthor's Response: Its just a little scene I'd have liked to have seen in Jo's book, but we can't always get what we want.
Bye the way I'm loving your story 'When Character meets Actor' its really twirty and funny too! Report Review
good story men maybe 9/10 but still goodAuthor's Response: Thanks lol, I'm glad you liked it. Report Review
oohhh this is so good please update soonAuthor's Response: I'm off on holiday, will try to get something up when I get back. Report Review
oooh. damn that got harry pissed in a hurry nice beginning. i hope there is a lot of action in hereAuthor's Response: Thanks of the review!
I'm new at Fanfic and really only ment this as a Oneshot, but maybe I'll have a think about how to develop the story while I'm on holiday. Report Review
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