Really Great! Loved It! Can't wait till the next chapter!
~Megan~ Report Review
This is rather good although to me it seems rushed and rather short Report Review
Aww! Bless him! That was such a great chapter - keep up the great work! Report Review
please update soon! i love this fic and i cant wait till james wakes up! Report Review
please update! i love this story and i cant wait to see what happens next. is james gonna wake up??? Report Review
I love it so far, when are you going to add more chapters? Report Review
YAY u updated. im absolutely lovin the plot (so far;) please update soon 100/100 coz 10/10 wasnt enoughAuthor's Response: Thank you, so far I have 5 chapters actualy writen and hope to update more often now that my computer is running somewhat smoothly! Report Review
Hmm... very interesting...
I like the idea of James not being dead... but if he recovers, how will he react to Sirius' recent death???
Just watch a few words in there, some of them don't make sense, like at the start it says he saw Sirius fall "throw" the veil, and I think you meant to write "through".
Looks good though.Author's Response: thanks, I don't think I would have caught that. Report Review
o.sounds good. i also thought that dumbledore was manipulative in a way. Report Review
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