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Review #1, by GriffinClaw The Soldiers March out onto the battle field...

10th July 2007:
Aw, very good. It was kind of choppy, I would suggest adding some more detail. A few mistakes, you said he instead of she in the last chapter, and in the first sentence it said something like did'n't instead of didn't. Good story!

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah I was in a hurry.

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