{reviewid: 2734178, reviewer: 'Padfoot%20and%20mooney'}
23rd August 2012:
Sorry but ur wrong, Ron and Hermione all the way, their supposee to be together, that's the way it should stay, sorry, its a brill story though, very well written
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{reviewid: 2567653, reviewer: 'ElyssLongbottem'}
11th August 2011:
. I cry wen she left Ron .
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{reviewid: 2550783, reviewer: 'FredSnapeCollinTonksLupin'}
20th July 2011:
why the heck is sirius here?
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{reviewid: 2130067, reviewer: 'I%27m%20WAY%20too%20obsessed'}
31st May 2009:
You HAD to add Draco! Oh well other than that it was good! and funny but it didn't fit Hermione much!
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{reviewid: 1826593, reviewer: 'Muggle_of_mystery'}
| Review #5, by Muggle_of_mystery | Talking |
10th February 2008:
good so far - but careful with your spelling and punctuation
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{reviewid: 1813360, reviewer: 'Thia_capricorncutie'}
31st January 2008:
i absolutely loved this story! i cant wait 2 read the sequel!!
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{reviewid: 1752946, reviewer: 'Harryz%20Girl'}
15th December 2007:
You hardly said anything about Nevile and Luna!
Author's Response: Yeah sorry about that, In my mind they are doing Very Well and they have a son and daughter (twins)
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{reviewid: 1752943, reviewer: 'Harryz%20Girl'}
15th December 2007:
Awww! Sooo dramatic! I love it!
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{reviewid: 1711434, reviewer: 'girl%20who%20knows%20all'}
14th November 2007:
You need some serious lessons in puntuation
Author's Response: Yeah, i know i suck i'am learning how to read and write better thanx 4 the advice though
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{reviewid: 1658208, reviewer: 'monkeygirl100'}
6th October 2007:
Good so far
10
Monkey Girl :)
Author's Response: Thanx
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{reviewid: 1657478, reviewer: 'LupinFan45'}
6th October 2007:
its good! but i think u should keep writing!
LupinFan45
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{reviewid: 1657473, reviewer: 'LupinFan45'}
6th October 2007:
It's good, but i think u should write more thean just the two years later! anyways! good luck!
LupinFan45
Author's Response: Yea but i wanted to make it link into the next story im writing, so i wanted to make it a shorter time so people havent changed 2 much
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{reviewid: 1656968, reviewer: 'xSirius%20will%20never%20diex'}
6th October 2007:
ahhhrrgg! i cant read this! too many mistakes! (in grammar)
Author's Response: Iam sorry u think like this, iam learn to read and write better so i hope it improves in other storys
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{reviewid: 1656793, reviewer: 'star_and_crystal9'}
5th October 2007:
Sorry, but in my eyes you stuffed it up by doing the Draco/Hermione thing. Sorry.
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{reviewid: 1656782, reviewer: 'star_and_crystal9'}
5th October 2007:
Oo, love the cliffie!!!
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{reviewid: 1656772, reviewer: 'star_and_crystal9'}
5th October 2007:
hee hee, that was a pretty damn awesome hen's night!!! =P
Author's Response: A hen's night definalty has 2 be like that!
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{reviewid: 1656751, reviewer: 'star_and_crystal9'}
5th October 2007:
awesome!!! Just one thing, it's WEASLEY, not WEALSY. Sorry. This story is very good- you are writing it very, very well!
Author's Response: Sorry bout that it must be my stupid spell check on my computer.
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{reviewid: 1656737, reviewer: 'star_and_crystal9'}
5th October 2007:
Good job, just try to work on your spelling and grammar. Keep writing! I love this story!
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{reviewid: 1656732, reviewer: 'star_and_crystal9'}
5th October 2007:
Ummm. sorry, but you said this story contained spoilers, so I was just wondering why Fred, Dobby, Dumbledore and Sirius are still alive??
Otherwise, this is really good!
Author's Response: Harry and Ginny i ment sorry for confusing you
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{reviewid: 1656726, reviewer: 'star_and_crystal9'}
5th October 2007:
Very good, but it would be better if your spelling was more accurate.
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{reviewid: 1656520, reviewer: 'LupinFan45'}
5th October 2007:
I WANT TO KNOW! LOL!!!
LupinFan45
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{reviewid: 1656517, reviewer: 'LupinFan45'}
5th October 2007:
its ok, FYI: its rreeaalyy good!!!
LupinFan45
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{reviewid: 1656502, reviewer: 'LupinFan45'}
5th October 2007:
It's good, and not to be critical, but there is ALOT of spelling errors in all these chapters! (no offence i do it too!)
LupinFan45
Author's Response: Yea i know, im learning 2 read and write better so i hope it gets better
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{reviewid: 1656266, reviewer: 'LupinFan45'}
5th October 2007:
i want to know.MORE, MORE, MORE!
LupinFan45
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{reviewid: 1656256, reviewer: 'LupinFan45'}
5th October 2007:
write, write, write, write, write, write, write! i want to read it!!! lol!!
LupinFan45
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