yay, well done, I hope there more, I liked itAuthor's Response: Thanks! Yes, there is more, although not much more, because it is a short story. We're looking at 1-2 more chapters, depending on how I decide to split it up. Report Review
Yay!! Remus/Tonks is such a sweet pairing, and to be honest, one I can't wait to see on film, yet you brought it to life before my eyes.Author's Response: I absolutely love Remus/Tonks! I'm right with you there, I can't wait to see them on film, and I'm thrilled that you think I brought them to life. Thank you! Report Review
It's GREAT!!! I love the tension you feel right before the door flys open!Author's Response: Thanks! I was hoping the tension came across. Report Review
What do I think? What do I think?!? Bloody brilliant, that's what I think...
This is a fantastic bit of writing. Well paced, exciting, and executed perfectly. I couldn't locate anything to find fault with in this (and believe me I looked). You've managed to capture Bellatrix very well in particular, and I also enjoyed your Wormtail.
Very good use of italics throughout, both for spells and for emphasis.
And speaking of baited... I am now awaiting the next installment of this with baited breath. I'm a sucker for a well-written fic with a cliffhanger.
A very easy 10/10.Author's Response: That really means a lot to me, thank you! I'm so glad that you liked it. And all of those compliments...you've left me blushing. I've finished writing the next chapter, so it'll be up as soon as I can edit it and get it validated. Report Review
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