thnx sounds delicious of a story loved it yummy yummy hubba hubba Report Review
A very nice short story. Also feels true to the spirit of the HP books. I for one never was agreeable to the fact that Hermione and Ron were together and not H/HR. Your stories provide a very plausible alternate ending!
Well Done and hope you keep writing!! Report Review
Ron is.dead?(sniffle)NO MORE TRIO???(SNIFFLE,SNIFFLE)WAH! NO FAIR!! IT'S BAD ENOUGH THAT DUMBLDORE AND ONE OF THE TWINS DIED IN THE BOOK,BUT YOU KILLED OFF EVEN MORE! Report Review
wow this is such an awsome story, i love it. 10/10Author's Response: thank you Report Review
wow, great story. you're a really great writer. i wish i could write like you do. my stories always seem to come out wrong. how do you do it?Author's Response: honestly, i have no idea, but i really don't think my stories are anything special, i'm glad you like them though Report Review
This is reviw/comment for Merry Christmas Hermione andKiss Me as well.
I love the way you write Harry and Hermione, I can really see them together and feel their fear/nervousness as they take the first steps towards each other. This story and Merry Christmas Hermione seem to truly show how Harry can never really get past the horrors of his life and always takes everyone else's life on as his personal responsibility.
Kiss Me shows the bravery and loyalty that have always made Hermione a Gryffindor. The way she cares so much about Harry and also what her love for him does to Ron. Always she fights against Harry's need to protect her because she knows that she cannot do anything but help him.
Not much of a review is it? Every time I start to read through your stories I get caught up in the story, trying to anticipate what will come next. Perhaps next time I'll actually avoid getting too involved to provide contructive criticism :)Author's Response: don't worry, i'd rather you enjoyed the story than provide me with constructive critism Report Review
So unbelievably perfect.. Amazing job, as always. I don't know why it took me so long to actually get to this story, but well done. Great one-shot... Keep it up!Author's Response: thank you, i will Report Review
An excellent story! I enjoyed it very much!Author's Response: thanks Report Review
Good Job, very well written. I enjoyed it very much :)Author's Response: thank you i'm glad Report Review
OMG this is really good lol
keep writing okAuthor's Response: don't worry, i will Report Review
so when will the continuation of this one be posted lol, i thought too that that was a great ending to it Author's Response: well i don't know about a continuation, but i'll think about it Report Review
Very well done! I like that part about the scars. It really brings it to a conclusion.Author's Response: i hoped it would Report Review
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