I just couldn't resist leaving one of your stories out after reading the other three.lol. So here I am. I don't know why you said this isn't your best work because I liked it very much. You should proud of it, actually, because you have portrayed Rodolphus very well. OOC in some parts (at least, in my opinion) but very good, nonetheless. And need I say anything about your writing style? You were awesome!! Do write more stories, Chelsea. You are a wonderful author *squishes*Author's Response: Aw, thanks! That really means a lot. *glomps* Report Review
I wouldn't call this story bad. It is a bit odd, but it's alright. I still call it a nice job.Author's Response: That's sort of what I was going for, so I'm glad you agree. :) Report Review
it's good. in the story, do they still love eachother even through their marriage is like that ? do you know where i can find any stories where Bellatrix and Rodolphus love eachother ? 20/10Author's Response: I suppose they care for each other a little, but they definitely have higher priorities. Sorry, I don't have any recommendations at the time. Thanks for the review! Report Review
I absolutely loved this story! It's really expressed a new side to my favorite set of Death Eaters! Author's Response: Thanks! Report Review
This story is awesome, plus I luv ur banner. Did u make it or did someone else make it. I need a banner, but i can't seem2 get anyone 2 make it do uknow how, can u teach me, or can u make me one or help me get someone 2 make it 4 me? Please I'm desperate...please...please...please! 10/10Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the story, but a little more on your opinion would be appreciated. Yes, I made the banner, and I'm glad you like that too. You can get banners at the-dark-arts.net or at says-skills.com (from me). Of course, there are many other places, but those sites have a lot of HPFFers. :) Report Review
Oh, Chelsea, this is fantastic! Why would you call this bad? Bella seemed a bit off, but I suppose, being hormonal and all, that's to be expected. I think the time frame could use some clarification ... maybe mentioning that the Malfoy's child is coming? If I'm right in assuming their son would be Draco/the trio's age. Or would he be older? Yeah, that's where it could be cleared up a bit.
I like Rodolphus - especially that he pretends to be doing the Dark Lord's service. I wasn't quite expecting him to be so honest/mean with Bella, but the beginning sort of set me to thinking that he was completely dominated by her.
The writing is fantastic, of course. (You wouldn't think I'd push you to write something if you were no good?) Rodolphus' anxiety is very clearly portrayed; their argument sounded realistic but perhaps not very in character?; and the last line is just ... perfect.Author's Response: Thanks Elfy. Report Review
That was very Strange, it was heart breaking and sad, but deffintly a different look on the Lestrange pairing, loved the story ^_^Author's Response: Thank you very much! Yes, it was a bit strange... but I'm glad you liked it! Report Review
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