This is so cute!!
I love the ending.
it's just so...perfect i guess you could say. haha
great job!!Author's Response: Wow! Thanks, I like the ending too, because you can make it so many things. Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
I though this was really cool. I liked that you used Chris Dauhtry's song, I'm going home. I really like him and that song. I maybe do a sotry like this with a song. Thanks for insiring me. please feel free to read my story, "A New Day, A New Life' see ya!Author's Response: Thank you, I just heard this song and I was just hit with this idea for a story. I just had to write it. I am glad that I inspired you =] Report Review
its sweet, easy reading and enjoyable. looking forwards to the next one - madmooAuthor's Response: thank you! Report Review
oh the cuteness! I'm sorry, this is very lovely. Great piece of writing. How long did it take you? Sorry, the first reason i clicked on it wa because it was posted on my birthday...and i'm conceited like that. So not regretting it. Beautiful, i hope your proud!Author's Response: Umm, it only took me a couple of hours. And I am pretty proud of this fic, because it is my first one ever. I am glad you think it is lovely! Report Review
Hey! It's Maranda. I liked it. Not my normal style when I read fanfiction but I liked it. It was original and cared out perfectly. You should write more Lily fics b/c you really capture her character brillantly!
~rgfawkes~Author's Response: Why thank you Maranda! I am glad that you liked how I portrayed Lily. She is one of my favorite characters. Thanks for reviewing!!! Report Review
hey, this story was rather wicked and i enjoyed reading it!! woot hahah.xxxAuthor's Response: thanks, it's my first one ever so I'm glad you like it! Report Review
ah so sweet fits great with the lyricsAuthor's Response: thank you! Report Review
It's great! The song fit perfectly! I love it and give you a 10/10! ~Ginny~Author's Response: Thanks, it was hard trying to get the song to fi perfectly in. Report Review
wow. keep up the good work!Author's Response: Thank you soo much! Report Review
Wow, great job. Author's Response: Thanks! Report Review
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