Oooh... very good chapter! I'm glad to see that Dumbledore is skeptical about Gwendolyn. And this Labyrinth sounds frightening. Wow... I love this thing about killing the Dementors. Very curious to learn about the woman creature. I really enjoyed this chapter and can't wait for more. :) Thanks!

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Good chapter! Hmm... Remus and Sirius know something isn't quite right either. I hope Harry will listen to them. And poor Snape. He's really hurting. Thanks for the update!! :)

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Okay, so I take it Maclay knows Legilimency. That was pretty funny about Hermione's comment about Lavender and thinking she said it out loud. :)

I really like your story so far and cannot wait for it to continue! :)

Author's Response: Thanks for reading my story. I have been having problems with my computer so i will not have a new chapter up till later today maybe thanks for reading,

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Good. I'm glad Hermione is doing research about Maclay and that Ron feels something not right, too. Also, I like Sakura Tsukino. I can just picture this little Japanese woman who seems very fragile, but when faced with war, becomes a fierce warrior. :)

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So there WAS a thing between them. :) (Okay, I sort of had a feeling...) Anyway, another good chapter, but I'm with Hermione. There is something definitely not right with this Maclay person.

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Aww He found a family member! I guess that sort of explains Snape's dislike for her: being a Potter. Unless... it goes even MORE beyond that. :) Again, good chapter.

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That place was pretty cool: looking up all records you wanted to know. And.. hmmm... August 79 she goes missing. Interesting... very interesting. :)

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Very curious to know the deal with Snape and Maclay! haha And I laughed when she learned that he was a teacher. "You...Children" lol :)

Good chapter. I'm glad you're using familiar things from the book. Brings a sense of comfort when you can recall things that happened before. Makes it more real. :)

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Ooh Very interesting start to this story. :) I have to say that your writing is pretty good. I can't wait to continue. :)

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India this is a great story keep it up.

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nice story

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Great chaapter! Update soon! 10/10

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Ok...this was an interesting story. I really like how all of this is going! Please continue as soon as possible! I really like it!
-jkrofanatic14

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Harry has another family member! That's totally awesome! I can't wait for the next chapter! UPDATE SOON!!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review i have to say that im going to be busy alot so i may not be able to post that much

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oh!! I can't wait to find out what happens next!
'Hogwarts Professor Maclay Disappears'?? that just sparked my curiosity more!! As the story continues, you are making it more suspensful and interesting!!
Please update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review

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Very very great!! Can't wait for the next one. This story is very interesting. When exactly is this supposed to take place. After 4th year? Or just a random story, in which the time frame doesn't matter? Update soon!!

Author's Response: well i just got back so im going to post the next chapter. Yes it takes place after 4th year but theres many twist lying ahead so keep reading

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This is very interesting. I want to find out what happens to Harry and I like how you're portraying this 'Wrong Way Maclay' person. I also like the conversation between Dumbledore and Snape about the DADA postion. Update soon, it's a very good start!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review but its kinda getting annoying that it take 10 DAYS im sory after i try to post the next chapter i will be goinm for a cuple of week and tell people to read please!

India Bowsher aka cardcapter1

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