i loved this story!! i think it is just perfect! really i do! and very realistic! you can so relate to the characters all the way through! but then again, seeing as you say this is based on happenings in your life, that is not surprising! still, it fits fanfiction really well!! and also, the fantastic writing helped things along! i felt really satisfies after reading it, even though i hoped ron would love hermione back, but then i found that his answer was more realistic and not cliche, and i like that! :D it would be interesting to read the end though... and i think i'd deffinately read the ending that wins your contest!
Rose :)Author's Response: Thanks so much, but sadly there will be no ending. :( at leats not for the contest. the staff has warned about this, because it is an "interactive story" which apparently, is no allowed. I'll need to change that soon, and hopefully I'll come up with something for an ending on my own. Anyways, thanks for the review! and I'm glad you liked it so much! Report Review
one shot, one shot (while reading plz scream out these words) r u nuts make it full fledged first time i got to read ron sain no to hermiony carry it on oh plzAuthor's Response: Ah, I may add more, but as stated, this is based on mine and Alex's life, so when more happens in our lives, more happens in the story. Until then, the readers write the ending. Report Review
omg ive had so many of those times its not even funny!
THAT WAS SUCH A PERFECTLY CHARACTERIZED STORY! :D
XD GREAT JOB! Truly awesome it is-i think ill write an ending to it, but it'll be sad guaranteed as ive always been the "hermione" kinda person in this story! :p
:) Rating 10/10
from light_blueAuthor's Response: Great! I was planning on extending the due date since no one participated before. As soon as ch.8 for my other story, I will edit this one to extend the due date, probably til like Valentine's day or somewhere around there. Might make it Feb 29th since you don't get many of those. :P lol. Report Review
Cute story, although I could see Ron being more head over heels for Hermione then how you wrote him. As he only wanted friends, in canon i think he would be jumping for joy. But I knew you were reflecting your own life with Alex and it was a cute and interesting read. Would you mind reading one of my stories? Author's Response: Thanks so much. And of course I'll read one of your stories. I'm always up for new fanfics. :) Report Review
Wow! I really enjoyed that, actually. I wasn't sure how it would turn out, but it surprised me with how well it flowed. The only thing I had was that Hermione seemed a teeny bit out of character in some situations, like when she and May would talk, but then we only ever see her socializing with the guys in the HP books, so I guess that works too. Anyway, 9/10, and thanks for a great read!Author's Response: Glad you liked it so much! And yea, I thought Hermione would act a bit different around her girl friends, so she was a lil out of character, but I'm glad you liked it!! Report Review
-runs around in circles- YAY! -runningflyingtackleglomp- I luff you Amber! Story dedicated to mwah! I luff ya! -hits- BUT WHY DO YA HAVE TO TELL MY LIFE TO EVERYONE EH? Lol, I'm just kidding girlie! And YAY CONTEST! Oh wait...dang it! I can't compete! >.< *sigh* Oh well. Banner time! Hey peoples, I may be insane, but I am a decent roleplayer and will be making sure the three people will deserve the places! I'm the one who kepes Amber in check ;) ANYWHO! Thanks alot girlie! I luff ya! MMOTPB!!!
~~Alex~~Author's Response: Awww, I luff you too, girlie!! Glad you liked it!! Wrote it just for you!! *huggles* Report Review
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