Wow, this was so sad. I feel so bad for Sirius, loosing his best friend and Lily, having Peter betray them, and going to Azkaban... I thought this was a very good story! I loved how you portrayed Sirius' reaction, I could totally picture it. It was so sad, in my mind's eye, I saw Sirius cradling James in his arms, rocking, crying. Then taking Lily downstairs... wow.
Then there was Remus, I felt so horrible the moment he walked in the room. Two of his friends dead. I mean, Sirius had it really bad, but I think Remus had it really bad too. What he has is James, Lily, and Peter dead, and Sirius a murderer. For twelve years, who knows where he is, and he has to live with all that, and his Lycanthropy... Poor Moony.
Then, when Sirius cornered Peter, I loved it. It was such an important moment. It's when the Marauders are finally completely broken apart. It's horrible.
I loved Fred and George's part of finding Peter. Lol, I could totally picture that happening. And finally, poor Sirius, being locked up in Azkaban at the end. I loved this story, and thought it was wonderful! Great job!
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That was amazing yet sooo SAD!
I'm in tears
I couldn't even begin to imagine what i would do if my best friend died.
The last line made me cry even more
"He enjoyed sleeping because that was when James came to see him."
its so sad. I ahte Voldy! James and Lily were so cool
GO THE MARAUDERS!!!
(oh i hate peter too, stinky rat)
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oh god. . . .this was amazing! I know it's complete, but maybe a sequel? You know that deals a little with the intervening years and with what Sirius goes through when he gets the paper from Fudge and realizes where Peter is? Report Review
The beginning of the of the story, with Sirius. I think that this is the first time that you really get into his character. I like the communication between them. I liked Sirius reaction. However, it is so sad that Lily and James died, at least Harry survived. I think that the characterization of the characters was good. Sad at points, but none the less great. Report Review
hey!! loved the story!!! only one question though... if scabbers was percy's rat why did fred and george find him?? Report Review
that was really sad.but well written! Report Review
That was really good. Very powerful, and it fits in well with canon. I thought that it was Sirius that suggested Peter for secret keeper and no one except James, Lily, Sirius, and Peter knew about it. I could be wrong though. Great story, 10-10 Report Review
HOLY COW.just.HOLY COW.wow you REALLY captured the madness and absolute fury of the situation. i cried with Sirius and Remus that was so painful. PLEASE keep writing!!! your start is really really good i can't wait to read more! Report Review
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