cute, pretty accurate in the first half about the emotions, harry was a little ooc though... hmm. didn't really care for the whole comment about lots of kids being withdrawn, too off-canon. meh 9/10 Report Review
I like the play of emotions. I always felt that the fall out from the funeral deserved more attention that it got in the books. Nice choice of song.Author's Response: Thanks, I was listening to the song one day and that storyline wouldn't get out of my head. My daughter suggested I do a fan-fic, and that's how I got started. Report Review
I love how she yells at him. I always love picturing Ginny yelling at him. It gives her so much character doesn't it? Anyways, I love this story. Ginny is such a great character to write, and you captured her very well! Good job!Author's Response: Thanks! I always picture her telling him off, too...goes so well with the red-head temperament! Report Review
You are a great writer! I honestly can't think of anything you need to improve. Write More! Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words! My first review!! :) Report Review
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